Reviews for A Different Take on Naruto

BY : Lannister

  • From C_Wade on April 25, 2019

    'As the fastest man alive'... lol

    Just kidding though, nice chapter as always, seemslike the pace is finall ypicking up, though Kushina's and Konohamaru's relationship still seems pretty innocent. Naruto also seems to have gotten even more admirers, so that makes me hopeful for his future. Love the way Ino is so naughty, though I'm starting to feel bad for Sakura... Jiraiya just isn't interested in her at all it seems. Can't wait to find out which 'poor and unsuspecting' student Shizune had her way with. However, I hope the story isn't going to branch off into too many paths with all those side-stories/pairings, would be a shame to see the main cast suffer for it.

    Thanks for the update anyways, looking forward to more.

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  • From Siklos88 on April 25, 2019

    Looks like things are really starting to set in motion. Also really like the Inuzuka stuff and Hana with the dogs. I think she has more than one, so is a gangbang in the cards? Can’t wait, update soon

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  • From crowfeast1405 on April 22, 2019

    Love the story concept and honestly I think it is interesting but I'm kinda waiting for you to get to the lemon spots because I really want to see what is going to happen here.


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  • From Damar on April 19, 2019

    >Kushina and Konohamaru

    And that's all I need to see to know this is shit, so fuck this retarded crap, and I hope it burns.

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  • From flacj on April 19, 2019

    Hands down my favorite story on this site at the moment. I hope you don't stop it. Granted it my slow in getting to the juciy parts but that makes it all the more better. I hope Naruto gets mad when he finds out Konohamaru and his mom have been getting it on. And hope Kushina comes off as not exactly caring about naruto's feelings. 

    It would also be good if Mikoto, Sasuke's mom get it on with Naruto or more people. And Sasuke gets it on with no one. Kind of like some light-sasuke bashing. 

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  • From Siklos88 on April 18, 2019

    Great chapter as usual

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  • From C_Wade on April 18, 2019

    Another enjoyable chapter (with some minor issues, like Kurenai 'hiring' a movie etc..), though I hope they hurry it up with their platonic relationships ^^

    The thing with the swinging is good too hear, always something I enjoy personally. Looking forward the most to Minato/Ino and Jiraiya/Sakura at the moment, though I wonder how that is going to turn out with her lack of tits which Jiraiya doesn't seem to appreciate ^^

    Anyways,  looking forward to the next chapter!

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  • From Lannister on March 31, 2019

    @C_Wade: Yes, all of them will be swinging in some way. In Naruto and Kurenai's case there is another woman gunning for him who has been mentioned but not introduced yet.

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  • From C_Wade on March 31, 2019

    Really good, i like it! A question though, as for the current pairings (Naruto Kurenai, Minato Ino, etc) will they be involved with others/develope other relationships? I'm just wondering because of the 3+ tag. Anyways, keep up the good work!

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  • From Siklos88 on March 30, 2019

    Really like the way this is going. Tsunade and Udon and Naruto and Kurenai are definitley my favorite so far. I wonder if Shikamaru’s mom will help him out as well? Great chapter, update soon!

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  • From Fenreld on March 25, 2019

    This is interesting. Wish I knew how to follow a story here

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  • From AFFModerator on March 22, 2019

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  • From C_Wade on March 19, 2019

    More interesting than I thought it would be. Anxious to see where this goes, keep up the good work.

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  • From Siklos88 on March 17, 2019

    Lol, I’m an idiot and didn’t realize you just posted two at once. Regardless I really liked this chapter as well. I’ll always appreciate some good build up in a story. I especially like the competition between Kushina and Kurenai, maybe they’ll eventually try and see who can please Naruto better? Tsunade could join in as well. Also interested to see where the Tsunade and Udon thing ends up, I’m pretty sure you were implying he had large balls, so it’ll be cool to see Tsunade worship them. Great 2 chapters, update soon!

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  • From Siklos88 on March 16, 2019

    Damn, shame I didn’t see this when the first chapter got uploaded cuz this is really good. Not too big on the Minato x Ino, but I really like the Shota Naruto x Kurenai. Great work!

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