Reviews for The Troublesome BedBy : c0p13r |
Nice I like it, can't wait for the next chapter.
I think it's a great start to the story, and I enjoy how it treats the characters with respect, ya know? Kiba isn't some weird Chad, Temari ain't a slut, and Shikamaru isn't a fool...
I've enjoyed your stories through the years, and I really look forward to reading more of this one in particular. Thanks for writing!
I'm so excited to read this!
No matter man I'm sure everyone will love the story regardless of the outcome.
Great work, thanks for posting! An interesting pairing that I can't wait to see play out. I'm looking forward to when things start heating up ;)
I feel like there's other things I should notice about this story so far (like how well the bedroom troubles between Shikamaru and Temari are presented and how there'll actually be reasoning behind their actions and not just straight up pent up lust gone wild), but the only thing I can focus on is Karui. Karui has got to be one of the most underappreciated girls in all of Naruto.
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