Reviews for A trip to the home

BY : BigBadBootyDaddy


  • From DanM on August 13, 2018

    Need more chapters. Please update

     



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  • From ShroudedShinobi92 on July 17, 2018

    I'm not going to lie I haven't seen many stories with the Third Hokage as the main character this makes for an interesting story. I only have one thing to say concerning it though I don't know if you know this, but I'm going to assume that you don't know about the whole hair color thing. All ow me to explain, when you included Minato early in the story you said blonde to describe his hair color. Well there's a differnece when it comes to males and females who have the same hair color. I'll use Tsuande as an example when describing her hair color its blonde, but when males like Minato or Naruto are used for that matter its blond. Don't feel bad though I have to admit I didn't know it either until someone else explained it to me. Other than that everything's great about the story keep up the good work.



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  • From Berseker96 on July 07, 2018

    Good chapter bro



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