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By : BigE2955
  • From ANON - SomePerv on April 21, 2018

    Are you taking suggestions from the reviews or do I have to go to the discord account?

    If you are taking them here then here some of mine.

    (Futa-Tsume x Hinata x Naruko + others girls. Cuckold Kiba.) Sum- Each time Kiba brings over a girl Tsume can't help but make them into her bitch. Start with Hinata as the newest girl. (Tags: Pet play/slave)

    (Naruko x Hiashi) While waiting for Hinata to return from a mission Naruko spends time with a lonely Hiashi and things happen. (Cuckold Hinata/netorare/lez turned straight?)

    (Hinata x Raikage) Really want one that doesn't involving cuckold Naruto or is set in the canon. No Naruto/replaced with Naruko maybe. Hinata has an encounter/encounters with the Raikage. Could be four chapters. Encounter 1- On solo-Mission Hinata is caught in a storm and takes refuge in a cabin, where the Raikage has already arrived. E2- While on a holiday trip (with her family/alone/with lover/fiance -Naruko or random guy) Hinata takes a late night dip in the hot springs and finds that the Raikage had the same idea. E3- months later Hinata learns the Raikage is in Leaf and comes running when he sets up a private meeting between and he gives her a tempting proposal. E4- During her last mission before retirement/marraige Hinata is attacked by rogue nin who sneak her into Kumo and is reunited with the Raikage. (corruption/slave/possible sequel)

    Sequel (Naruko x Kumo men/Raikage x Hinata) Believing him to be involved, Naruko tries to seduce and get answers out of the Raikage and his men only to fall prey to them.


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  • From ANON - on April 21, 2018

    Ooohh, how bout a Naruto version. Where Naruto cheats on Hinata with a variety of women like her sister Hanabi.


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  • From ANON - on April 21, 2018

    I copy pasted this into a word document ,replaced all "Sasuke" with "Naruto" and all "Uchiha" with "Uzumaki". Now it's readable.


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  • From ANON - What? on April 21, 2018

    All your stories are amazing and this is no exception. 


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  • From ANON - Tony Trill on April 21, 2018

    Here’s the main flaw of you using cuckhold for this specific chapter:

    How is this cuckholding if Kiba hasn’t fucked his mother or sister??? He isn’t even in a sexual or romantic relationship with them.

    This is more like a voyeur story than a cuckholding story.

    So change the cuckholding tag to a voyeurism tag.


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  • From crowfeast1405 on April 20, 2018

    Love this idea, would love to see more ideas going on this story concept. Can't wait to see if you do a part two to this story idea.

     


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