Reviews for The Big Deal

BY : jjscriptease


  • From SniperJoe on June 19, 2018

    At first I thought the title was a clever pun on Sakura's problem being her big knockers. Then I was like, oh it also refers to naruto's D.

    And then the twist at the end. Wow, it's like a three layered trap. It's a three layered pun.

     

    Anyway, I really enjoyed it. I guess it's a one-shot but I found it super well put together and written.

    I especially liked how Sakura gradually got into it.

     



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  • From Seele01 on April 29, 2018

    This was a very good read. I hope you can write more in the future. Although I almost missed this story completely since it was posted in the Naruto/Sakura section. Just by looking at the date on the other stories you can tell that not too traffic goes on this page. This story would be way more popular if it was posted to the general or at least the front page of the HET Male/Female page.

     



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  • From Scrubavore on March 18, 2018

    Great read! It's been a while since you've posted a fic on this archive, and you're writing skills haven't dulled in the slightest. Still as vivid and descriptive in your narrative as back then.

    Body modification as the Mcguffin—that's different. At the end of the story, your penchant for dark humor is shown again. I'm surprised he didn't die or get castrated this time. Then again, the implications of the end leave me even more uncomfortable.

    Oh well, till your next post.



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  • From halbvoll on March 18, 2018

    Hell yes.

    Please write a second chapter with Naruto being the victim of that boob-jutsu :D



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