Reviews for Shogi Anyone?

BY : Shortcake

  • From kinda_adorkable on May 03, 2018

    A great start to an interesting concept. I've never read a Sakura/Gaara story before, so I'm excited to see what's in store for our pink-haired, knuckle-popping, quick-to-violence protagonist!

    "Brother from another mother." I haven't heard that in so long! Lol.

    I'm getting some pretty bad vibes from fuckboy Genma! Leering at Sakura-chan like that!

    In all seriousness, though, your sentence structure is more than acceptable and your grasp of punctuation and grammar are, thankfully, well polished. And the characterization of Sakura is perfect. OOC-ness can be very irritating at times (insert cracking knuckle sounds here).

    Great job!

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