Kak cerita sasuke sama hinata dong,alur cerita perselikuan,ceritanya yang agak kasar

Ignore Orien. I actually look forward to your stories, please keep writing.  Well done :) 

Gee. Another unique fanficton idea coming from you. Who'd have thought you'd be writing yet another story about Sasuke being a hung God of the Narutoverse, and every other male character being a beta class cuck? By the way, if any of your stories were truly NTR then none of the women that he beds would stay with their partners. Netorare is Japanse slang that literally means "taken away by sleeping with". Meaning that the woman (or women in your fanfics case) leave their partners for him. You really don't know what you're doing.

I get the feeling that you have to live vicariously through other characters in your stories because there isn't a Sasuke in your life to breed your significant other for you. That would explain this fixation that you have on him. Keep your chin up son, I'm sure there's someone out there willing to be your bull. You may even be lucky enough to clean up after them. Lucky you, right? Let's be real though...I'd put money on the fact that you're single. You probably wouldn't be publishing your mediocre fanfiction ideas and wet dreams about Sasuke on this website if you weren't.

I feel like your stories have scared off other authors in this section who are actually competent at writing. The Naruto side of this archive has become an cesspool of stories like this, and all of your other stories. Who can blame them for looking at other websites when stories like this exist?

Even the hope I had been holding onto for this section is fading fast with your presence. A small portion of my soul dies whenever I check back to see yet another story from you. Each time you gleefully type out a word for any of your stories (probably fondling yourself like a teenager in the throes of puberty who just saw his first pair of bare breasts), a small child cries in dismay, instinctively knowing that the world just became that much worse of a place. Your writing should be classified as a crime against humanity. And in those countries where assisted suicide is legal, a key tool.

This is the part where I'd usually bid you a fond farewell, and impart a wish for you to have a pleasant day. But really the only thing I can bring myself to wish for is for your computer to crash, and for you to develop a rash in the most uncomfortable of places.

Oh wow ! A Sasuke story that has him with everybody else girl cause thier less bigger or better in bed then him ?!  =D

Yeah...cause that fic never been done before... ffs

This was nice, keep it up!  I was wondering if you could write Sasuke getting Sakura pregnant with baby #2?

it's not ntr if they stay with there husbands it's also not ntr if they still love there husband.

chapter 2

Will Sasuke evenetually go after women whodont have direct links to positions of power but still look fuckable like Kurenai, Yugao and Samui? or Samui or Hotaru (anime only characters)

Nicely done. Pride is such a feeble thing. So easily discarded. Keep up the good work.

Like I gave you before, nice story where you give us some forshadow of what Sasuke will do and say to get what he wants.

Hoping Naruto is not going to be NTRed.The summary implies it will not be so, but I have seen a plenty of these kinds of fics to know that means nothing.

This is actually a pretty good idea. I really like the plot being mixed in with the smut. Though one recommendation I do have is to make the smut a little different or kinkier or something like that. Don't be afraid to experiment with different ideas like a gangbang and shit like that. As always great chapter and I'm very excited to see where you go with this story. 

Good story so far for a ch. and interesting concept, I will definitely look forward to your next ch

Love this story and can’t wait for the others. Update soon