Reviews for My Bestfriend's Mom

BY : Naruto_911

  • From crowfeast1405 on November 09, 2017

    I like this story but my problem is that I have a hard time spacing out what is going on here. Just some friendly advice, maybe go back and change it to where someone can read it more clearly and know where the talking starts and ends. That way the flow is better and doesn't look like long ass paragraphs. But otherwise great story altogether.


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