Reviews for Secrets of the Hidden LeafBy : Sessakag |
Loved the cbapter, it was fantastic. The end with naruto going though so much effort to take cAre of hinata was perfect
This was a really good chapter man I loved the Naruto and Hinata moments and them sharing their kinks with each other and it's a good thing saskue didn't see what's in those books otherwise Hinata would have been in troblue
So if Hinata says one of her kinks is kissing another woman, will Naruto whip out his Sexy no Jutsu and find out it's anatomatically correct??? And if Sasuke does join them for a threesome, I can see Hinata waking up with Naruto and Sasuke on either side, Sasuke learning Sexy no Jutsu for the bedroom and to give himself a disguise, so Naruto wakes up with Hinata and Sasuke-chan on either side of him, or Sasuke maybe waking up with Hinata and Naruko snuggled up to him.
Another great chapter. I love the realism that you put in to the fic. Naruto for example could of forced the issue with Hinata and got what if wanted. She is slightly submissive and she loves Naruto dearly, he could of used that to jump in to fetish stuff. Here like a real couple they are talking about it and going to work in to it. So many fics have the character just jump right in and do anal or something with out any prep work and their partner go along with it.
please by the end notk have any kinda pegnancy as it would elvolve this past a little fun forHinata intosomething serous.
can’t log in some reason any road I understand where your coming from you can’t please everybody but that’s how it goes I can’t wait for ch.4 what turns Hinata’s crank
Omg I can't wait to see Sasuke in the equation. If the sex scenes are already this steamy... boy, it will get hotter or it will get hotter?
Great work and until the next chapter!
I'm a huge fan of NaruHina!! Love them together! It will be interesting to see how you bring Sasuke into it. Plus, I love your InuYasha works as well :)
question: since eventually Sasuke will get to ample Naruto's girlfirend body will Naruto get to sample Sakura?
Its nice to read anything that actually sounds like real sex, not just swearing and bland descriptions. You are a light in the darkness, helping Naruhina fans get off in the morning!
That was fantastic, though when you do go a bit rougher with things between naruto and hinata I hope you spend time on the after care. It's a big part of bdms that most writers ignore completely. I kind of thought of naruto as a big after care person the shower scene kind of seamed like this naruto fits that
I'm loving this fic. One of the main things I love is Naruto's confidence and experience. A lot of Naruto/Hinata fans don't understand that Naruto would have to be the driving force behind that relationship. Hinata is just to shy.
I really love that Naruto wants to push her boundaries and experiment. I do hope that Naruto can talk her in to using clamps and trying anal. Though she'll have to be prepped for the latter :) I'll keep reading this fic with interest.
I gave it a second chance and honestly it's good really good so I'm sorry if my first review came off sounding kinda douchey I just don't like Sasuke at all so I pretty much skimmed through the first time so once again sorry. That being said I do like what you did with Naruto and Hinata's personalities and I'm looking forward to ch3
Another fantastic chapter! I wonder what Hinata's desires and fantasies are? We pretty much know what Naruto is into but Hinata's are a mystery. Keep up the good work!
This made me horny
Pleaaaaase update this! This is so good
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