Reviews for Monster

BY : Sessakag

  • From ANON - Hanzo Uchiha on January 29, 2019

    great story so far best Naruto fanfic ive ever read next to "When a Heart Cracks"

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  • From ANON - Charlie on August 07, 2018

    Ahhh the suspense. What’s happening to Hinata? & Shino? Mah gaaaawd my heart.

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  • From ANON - Charlie on July 24, 2018

    i swear I have been up the past 2 days reading this fix. It’s great, keep up the good work. 

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  • From ANON - dr.jekyl_hyde on July 20, 2018

    I was wanting to wait till I had gotten caught up to chapter 24 before writing a review... but I couldn't do it.  I know there is angst coming, but the comedy that you've illustrated through your story-telling is second to none, and staying very true to the core of the Narutoverse.

    Just please finish this story.  There are so many great, unfinished NaruHina fanfics out there.  And I'd hate for this story to join that growing group.  I look forward to reading the rest of your story.

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  • From Shortcake on March 01, 2018

    Great chapter! The description of Ino’s nightmare and breakdown was incredible.

    on another note, I’m truly sorry about your brother. I pray you will have peace even in grief.

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  • From ANON - on February 24, 2018

    Very goid story writing. Very detailed desprictions that add to the pleasure of reading this story. 

    Keep up the good work! Hopefully your next chapter will come out soon and you'll keep writing. 


    Good luck and my respects!


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  • From Shortcake on February 04, 2018

    Fantastic story. I especially enjoy that the erotic scenes are mixed into the dark tale. The interwoven emotions and conflict are compelling. Can’t wait to see where this story goes.

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  • From Kenshinryuu on January 25, 2018

    Poor Shukaku, he did not deserve that fate. I hope none of the other Bijuu get caught. But Hinata is going to the guy who wants to steal her from Naruto. I hope she can fight off Tonrei on her own or Naruto and Kurama come to the rescue.

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  • From ANON - NIV on January 24, 2018

    Another great chapter! Poor shukkaku ( dunno if I spelled it right lol). I love the jellyfish! Can't wait for more!

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  • From ANON - NIV on November 18, 2017

    OMG!! I love this story as well as your other Naruto story! I absolutely  love Hinata and Naruto together! I guess as fellow naruhina fans, we have to support one another lol. Also, I love your story telling and chara terizatio in this and even from your InuYasha fanfics! I love how you keep the characters the same like the anime but yet different to suit this story, especially Hinata ( maybe I'm a little biased because I love her and identify with her), it just seems so much like her :) Great Story!

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  • From ANON - Anonymous34 on November 10, 2017

    Awesome fanfic!!! I have started visiting this site more often just to check if another chapter of Monster or Secrets of Hidden Leaf is published or not. Just one thing, can you make the next chapter more action packed?! Maybe Naruto and his genin team run into more of the creatures and Naruto has to fight about 10-12 of them at a time? That would be interesting to read, given how his character development seems to be progressing in this story and also the fact that he is the hero of the fourth ninja war and son of fourth hokage, some more combat sequences would definitely be more interesting to read!!! 

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  • From ANON - Gn0stic on November 06, 2017


    I have to commend you on creating really dark and depressing atmospheres.  If that's what you were aiming for then kudos to you.  You've done a great job doing it.

    This chapter gave a really uneasy feeling and I quite like that!

    If there's (and there probably will be) a character 'transforming' I do hope you make the transformation verbally graphic.  Those are the best kinds of mutations! <3

    Please keep up the good work on both stories!


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  • From ANON - Gn0stic on October 29, 2017

    Mrf... Yeah this is picking up really nicely.  That there's going to be a lot of gore doesn't bother me.  That's another part of the "adult" part of adultfanfiction, isn't it? 

    It's not just reserved for sex.  Though the written smut in here is pretty damn good!

    Keep it up!

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  • From ANON - Gn0stic on October 22, 2017

    You're a good storyteller and I think I've already told you this a few times. 

    Still into this fic and I hope you keep pumping out chapters for your works at this rate!!!! :D

    Keep it up!

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  • From ANON - Gn0stic on October 09, 2017

    Damn! That was definitely a hot first first time for the both of them and I really wonder where the next hot scene will take place.

    Yes, my curiosity has been piqued and it's getting even better!


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