Reviews for Night in the Hyuga Household

BY : Doublenog

  • From BigE2955 on August 12, 2017

    Wow! This was really good. I like the dynamic, with Hinata wanting to both help her sister find some love while also sating her husband's incredible stamina - it works really well, and Hinata is someone I could see doing something of that sort. A second chapter would be nice, but don't force yourself to do it if you don't feel any inspiration, :)

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  • From shrike8675309 on August 12, 2017

    Perhaps the second chapter and threesome should be a flashback as to how the relationship started

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  • From pitbull4567 on August 10, 2017

    Interesting story 

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  • From Arkwright on August 10, 2017

    A little short, but well written. Honestly though, why couldn't Naruto claim Hanabi as his second wife? No one in the know has any problems with the arrangement as is. I really doubt that the Hyuga would have a major issue with it, let alone Hiashi. Why would they complain, when Hanabi would probably bear powerhouse kids with him? And its not like they would need the villages permission for such a union, since it would be more of a clan matter. Just some thoughts on my part, I'm not looking for an anwswer. 

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  • From nightwind83 on August 10, 2017

    Pretty good for a first go

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