Reviews for Naruto's Rebirth

BY : animehentaiworks

  • From Subhogue on November 05, 2017

    I'm sorry to say that the grammer is better but still not good. I would also encourage you to take things slower, add more details, for example: 

    Hinata gazed into Naruto's eyes, her own burning with love and desire, as she slowly removed his pants. She then slowly releived him of his underwear before stopping to marvel at his size. Licking her lips, she wrapped one hand around his cock as she started to stroke it gently. 

    Something like that is normally how I write things myself.

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  • From pitbull4567 on July 17, 2017

    Great chapter 

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  • From TypeAlphaAnarchy on July 17, 2017

    If you wrote this on your mobile again, I applaud you, while the grammar mistakes are all over the place, you conveyed the story and point well enough. You are doing good work fam

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  • From PervySage23 on July 16, 2017

    Can't wait for the next chapter to come out. You should add girls from different animes and add please add Anko

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  • From pitbull4567 on July 16, 2017

    Interesting story

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