Reviews for The Prophecy

BY : BigE2955


  • From The_King_in_White on October 08, 2017

    Ahh, that was clever. Quite a bit of dubious consent there to trick her like that. Still, it was a good shot. I hope if you ever do come back that escalates. Tricking is all well and good but there's nothing quite like a good old fashion rape mindbreak.



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  • From The_King_in_White on October 08, 2017

    Now this was a good chapter. I really like this story. Interesting new girls and a penchant for complete filthy dominance. I really wish it hadn't been abandoned.



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  • From The_King_in_White on October 08, 2017

    This is a step up on your earlier works. Even though I know it's dead in the water, I liked how you approached the smut viscerally. There's actual force in the words I guess you could say, rather than Sasuke simply saying he was forceful.



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  • From Spyash2 on June 08, 2017

    It was a pleasure to work with you on this. 

     



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  • From JohnLocke on June 08, 2017

    Someone's been busy.



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