Meh

So wholesome.

12/10

I’m usually a silent reader and I should probably start changing that by commenting on the most recent chapter. I’ve been pretty okay with any direction you decide that this story takes but this chapter surprised me in a good way and I’m genuinely looking forward to what happens after “this”. I didn’t see that one coming but I was pleasantly surprised and enjoyed this more than I thought I would. 

Also when you mentioned the mating press you know it’s real lol.

Use the mating press on Hinata !

I decided to read your stories since I read your reviews on Kage Sexbomb and I gotta say man you’re really a hypocrite. Do you know that? First you commented on Sniper Joe’s story acting like you’re an expert. 

So what? Just because you made a couple of Fics of your boyfriend sasgay now makes you a expert? Gtfoh 

i find it funny how you said “We're on a website called 'Adult Fanfiction'. 'Porn' doesn't necessarily mean that it has to suffer a complete lack of logic and good story telling. The best kind of porn is the kind that can sweep you away and engross you.” And yet your story has sasuke fucking hinata tell him she  still loves naruto and yet she keeps getting fucked by sasuke. What kind of knowledge is that? Bro you’re obviously a sasuke fan boy that can’t stand having their precious boyfriend being cucked. Seeing how you make fanfics of your boyfriend being a sex god at the same time don’t want to cuck sasuke because you can’t “see him being cucked”  proves my point.

 Big e stories: naruto is a loving husband that lets his best friend fucks his wife and he lets himself be humiliated. (And you seriously go to other people’s fic and criticize while ignoring your stories’ flaws? Bitch please) 

last thing. Don’t say that you don’t make money off of it when your broke ass be making money off of it on Hentai Foundry. Get out of your moms internet and WiFi and get your ass a job 

Needs a smidge more sph and cuck. Also the get boring and autonomous without suffient dialogue ,wanna see a bit more reasoning.

pretty hot, story's pretty good

"thank god this guy I am probably going homo for can transform into a hot girl, now I have plausible deniability if anyone ask if I'm a faggot"
Chapter 21 Sasuke in a nutshell

Great story keep it up

Looks like the author is showing their fetish of wanting to fuck Sasuke in this chapter since he’s trying to get Sasuke and Naruto romantically involved.

Okay ... I understand the cuck fetish, but if it turns into a gay love thing then its going to destroy this entire fic for me dude...

This is just what I feared when I wrote my last review. The gay subtext in this story has just become plain text.

You've reminded me of a doujin I read a long time ago where a guy steals and mind breaks his best friend's girlfriend, but then it turns out the big twist at the end is that the bad guy never cared about the girl, was gay, and was yandere style in love with his best friend, and had only turned his friend's girlfriend into a whore to get rid of her as competition so he could have him. At least that gay guy wasn't lying to himself.

I don't mind the NTR, it fits really well with Naruto being canonically a pathetic doormat and Sasuke being a textbook sociopath, but this thinly veiled faggotry cannot stand. Please move this story to "Yaoi - Male/Male" where it belongs. Miss me with that gay shit.

Very nice edition. What if the real Naruko was on her knees servicing the Uchiha with all the girls present and someone decides to startle Naruko causing her to drop the henge and back into her male form while her lips were pressed against his crotch and Sasuke is at the point of no return ,blue eyes looking into hhis Sasuke orgasms ...

another please !

sissy bastard