Really hot stuff your writing here. It really boosts my imagination and making me wish these stories had picture with them.

Hope to read more chapters.

Why not have Sasuke Knock Hinata up. She is still young enough for plenty more kids. I would think having women available and clan restoration and such it fits he would knock up his slut repeatedly.

You know it's people like you,lord of lust and RC that made me quit on this section of the adult fanfiction website thought you were done with this story siad to myself alright there is going to be room for non naruto basshing fics but nope coudn't let this one go just had to shit out a few more chapters of this fetish fic to piss some of us off all becuase you worship the ground sasuke walks on "i like naruto as a character" my ass that's bullshit just admit it to yourself you hate him so much it's not fun for you when you write a fic that dosen't involve bashing him in some way i mean i can't believe i'm saying this but i'd rather read a Yaoi fic on this section than your at least the gay writers are honest about what they write your just a hypocrite of the highest order "don't like the fic don't read no ones forcing you to" it's pretty much a bullshit statement whenthe only option readers have is between your bashing biased fics or another shit writers bashing cuckold fic or yaoi (there honest about what they write by the way just saying) i'll give you one thing though your quality of bashing is better than theirs.

Not a fan of Naruto being cuckold. Kind of wish you would write a story of Hinata be a slut that didn't involve Naruto being cuckold.

TBH, I really wish you focus more on non Sasuke centric fics. I mean , haven't you already done a lot of them already? You've also finished this fic already and wrote a remastered version. I really think you should do other fics. I'm sure people have requested fics from you, why not try the ones where Sasuke is not the focus and Naruto is the protagonist.

Loved the latest chapter. Just a quick idea kinky idea. Why not have Naruko purposely make her form more closely resemble Kushina, so that Sasuke can sort of also dominate Naruto's mom and taunt her with it in a wierd sort of way? That would be an easy way to add another "character" to this fic without having to extend the harem further and make it ridiculous.

Nice ending.

I dont really like sasuke centered stories but this story is very good.

I think in this story Naruko is the only one that gets completely and utterly broken. And I'm okay with that. Considering it's 'Naruto's Fetish' it would seem like that would be the crowning moment of glory. All I can say is that I wish that scene was longer.

That said, having the four year old kids dildoing up their mom's pussy to keep the cum in is a bit...eh.

Now this is what I call incest. Properly depraved and all. We need some of this perspective when you write your Sasuke/Mikoto smut.

We have descended. Hinata's humiliation talk is really stepping the cuck game up.

I also enjoyed the Himawari pregnancy scene and discussion. It's not meant to be a realistic fic, but it's a breath of fresh air that helps keep it from being solely about penis A in slot B.

I really liked this chapter. It's a bit light on the smut but more than anything it really illustrates Naruto breaking down. He's so utterly consumed by his fetish now that his thoughts have become irrational. Most people would agree Sasuke is taking advantage of them all to satiate himself, but he is starting to legitimately inwardly see Sasuke as some sort of savior figure.

' her mouth already full of cock. '

Ah you just had to fucking go there didn't you.

That said, this chapter actually aroused me. That blowjob was pretty top tier stuff, and the actual dirty talk suited. Sasuke and Naruto have always had a contentious relationship. The struggle for dominance is one of the counterpoints in the series. To be so decisively defeated..

Noice.

" He leaned down to kiss her on the lips - but she tilted her head slightly, so he merely brushed her cheek. "

Holy shit dude. You can just feel Naruto's marriage break into a billion pieces at that moment.

Aside from that, I enjoyed the submissiveness and impregnantion in Hima's scene. That said, it could have really been played up. She mentions that she might never be as important as Sakura or as sexy as Hinata - it's a bit of slave mentality, and it would have been nice to see that explored for the degradation factor.

I found this a good juxtaposition of the earlier chapter where Naruto was the one getting the texts. They get material with a vastly different intent but react the same way. Naruto - despite being a cuck - is still at this point an active actor.

" Himawari being tossed around like a sack of potatoes, "

Sexy imagery lul.