I remember you once said that you don't hate naruto but after reading your story it is hard for me to believe that you dont hate him. You take some sick pleasure in humiliating an mc of an anime maybe you potray yourself as him. Its just my opinion though not a fact maybe I'm right maybe I'm wrong. I admit I found these stories arousing at first but now I'm glad I have finally come to senses. It's so sad really you have great talent in writing stories but to utterly destroy naruto like that...... it's disrespectful to the fans and yourslef as well. I hope in future you make stories that don't involve cheating or humiliation of this degree.

Excellent update, I was more interested in Himawari going into this but seeing how you've set things up I think I might even be more interested in Naruko. That said, I suppose I'll have to wait because Naruko would be the end of the story. 

PS - Why doesn't Sasuke get Sarada pregnant? 

Please have Sasuke impregnate Sarada. That would be the best.

Ugh why is this even here? This is garbage. All sasuke fans are same. They always write something bad about Naruto because they can't accept the idea that Sasuke is weak and useless. That orochimaru cock sucker is a faggot. One thing good that came from him is Sarada, another hole for Naruto to plough. 

So, how exactly is Sasuke supposed to hide THIS from his (first) wife Sakura? Because I doubt that you can hide impregnating both a modified Oiroke clone of your 'rival' and his wife after already impregnating their daughter for long.

OMG ,so evil to end at such a life changing moment. 

Keep it real ! upload soon k

This was great! I missed this story, and I'm glad you updated it.

I'm very interested in the idea of Naruto's subconscious placing him under Sasuke in every aspect of his life--even in terms of who should win their spars. It really drives home the point you're trying to make--that Naruto's truest desire is to be, for lack of a better word, a cuck. He's so beta that it's cute.

I'm also very happy that you added Sarada into the mix, because now we get so much delightful instances of Daddy Play (and the best part is that it's not just play). Such a good daughter, sucking her daddy's balls so diligently!

Sasuke wanting to watch Naruto fuck himself was amazing! I saw it coming and I'm glad you actually went through with it. The fact that Naruko was bullying herself really had me laughing. "Why are you fingering me? Oh wait, you're not? That's your dick? HAHAHA!" Too good.

I'm definitely glad that you decided to impregnate Hinata on this trip, too. Now, her and Naruko's babies will be the same age. It's the little things that a husband and wife do together that count. Lol.

I would also like to comment on how clean this chapter was written. I don't really know how to describe it, but it seems like it flows better than previous chapters, and the layout is pleasing to the eye. If the paragraphs are too long it seems sloppy--to me, at least. 

I'm very pleased with this chapter, senpai! Great job, and keep up the amazing work! Stay lewd!

10/10

<3

Naruto should try to get some sex from hinata more often. but you must not lose hinatas shy moraly straight personality .I get that she is more confident and is a lioness under the sheets but hinata is always hinata at heart. by the way really did laugh hard when Naruko asked naruto why he was fingering her.

Oh fuck man ! I wanted more why u stopped !

remember the very core of this story are naruto sasuke and hinata. also there should be more going on between naruto and hinata 

Please try not to use the word "twat". It does not sound erotic or sexy in anyway. Just sounds like a crude    .insult. 

hot sweaty kinky Sticky smut mmm...

@KuroKamiBR

Did you seriously just open that can of worms about Sasuke never standing a chance against Naruto in that final fight? And you used the lamest excuses why? 

Okay, before anything, I wanna know why no one ever tries to think that Naruto only managed to keep up despite the disadvantages because of plot armor? Final fight and Naruto is the title of the series, after all. 

But even without that, the point of the final fight has ALWAYS been about how the two were truly equals. Neither is truly stronger than the other. That entire final battle has been showing how they are equals, represented not in their fighting styles, but through the symbolism on their placings. If you missed that completely, then you truly did not pay any attention to the deatils throughout Naruto, and Naruto has consistently shown many forms and signs of symbolism. 

I can accept you having issues with Naruto losing like he did in this chapter (though BigE2955 clearly implies that Naruto subconsciously made himself lose), him being turned from a cuck to a woman that gets fucked, and Hinata going full in love with Sasuke that she wants to get knocked up. I can totally understand you having issues. 

But you trying to insist that Naruto is stronger than Sasuke in that final fight is where you are completely wrong. Naruto and Sasuke were truly equals in that fight.