Nice chapter. New to this fic here and it's pretty solid so far especially with the lack of Sasuke fics. I did enjoy the crossover chapters and I honestly wouldn't mind if you added in a few more characters from other series. Not too many but just a few. 

 So now we get more towards the crux of the plot. Now I believe my most interesting thought is in what order the next few women will be in. As in, who gets pregnant next. 

 As I've come to expect, you do not disappoint. I'm glad to see that you were still maintaining a high level of quality as well as a very fast update schedule.  Congratulations on having almost as many views as many much longer established stories. 

 You're just too quick. By the time I get to check to see if there's a new chapter, there seems to be two or three. Sorry for not having the time to review them all. 

 All in all, a good chapter with a nice throwback to an earlier time. A lot of people tend to forget the early years when writing stories like this. 

This is the first time I comment.

I'm really impressed by the speed and quality with which you write. I really like the fact that you add Rias to the story, you know it's hard to find stories of this kind and quality about Sasuke but it's even harder to find stories in which Sasuke interacts with characters from other series, so I really hope to see more Of Rias.

Well I really like the story. I really can't wait to see the next chapter.

Stick to what I said before. Variety is good, but I'd not recommend throwing in out of universe characters too often, or it ends up as an excuse to substitute originality for variety. I say personally that I prefer the former to the latter.

Otherwise, another good chapter. Keep it up!

it was a very good chapter. thank you. rias is an easily attractive crossover character. 

I had to actually google her to see who she was 

overall great chapter and I wonder how you going to carry on the story from here 

I see Rias won the poll. I'm a little sad, since I voted for Rangiku:(

Still, it's a nice change of pace from the focus exclusively on Naruto characters, though I wouldn't recommend it too often. Perhaps 1 in 10 chapters?

Regardless, thanks for another good chapter and here's hoping for more.

(Thumbs Up)

John

Good chapter.

I didn't expect to see TenTen so soon, in fact I forgot she even existed. Still, nice to see attention to detail and a more comprehensive grasp of the females available.

Chapter 16 has copied itself. Where there is the chapter and then it appears again. I don't know the words to explain it but you should check it out.

I don't know how I feel about cross overs though if you are going that way maybe esdeath from akame ga kill or azula from avatar 

also I hope there's one girl who will deny Sasuke the first time so he loses his shit that be jokes 

so how are you going to implement these characters from other anime 

i must be rambling a lot but 

maybe kaguya finds a way to come back to life and it opens different portals. 

I imagine naruko and Sasuke to be doing it like rabbits 

hope Hinata gets some character development but shy Hinata is still good or maybe road to ninja Hinata ? 🤔 

Ah kumo girls man I love there cocky ness 

tenten 🤔 Maybe they go on a mission to look for a sword or 🌚🌝

I hate how the sites sign me out like why? 

Double trouble nothing for Sasuke 

great chapter Hinata and sizune can't wait for those 🌝

2 birds 1 stone 🌚🌚🌚 

amazing chapter I can't stop reading it 

maybe it's something new 😐 

I do wonder who else you have in store for play 🌚🌝🌚

i likey lol