Reviews for The Lone Wanderer

BY : BigE2955


  • From NoHopeLeft on April 22, 2017

    I really liked Anko. She's a woman that fits Sasuke's personality. Independent, strong and stubborn. Sasuke might be on a redemption trip now, but lets not forget that he still has a temper and a strong sense for justice. I can also see the influence Orochimaru both had on them, though it would've been nice to see Sasuke interact with Orochimaru. He's one of the few people he actually respects.

    Karin ... I guess I wanted her a bit for feisty, but after a moment of thinking the virginity isn't that far off. Karin was in charge of Orochimaru's prison and never could trust anyone. Better to stay on the safe side than to sleep around. But yeah, Karin and always be a supporter for Sasuke. Her devotion goes beyond a normal harem girl, she's loyal.

    Question though, will there be pregnancies later? Like, more than just Sarada? Sasuke developing a harem is a great way to restore his clan and with a few willing woman, it'a actually possible. Not that I want to read a family fic, I'm fine with mostly porn but given the amount of sex I guess it's bound to happen sooner or later.



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  • From Shiroma on April 21, 2017

    Great fic so far but could you please add Fem.Kyuubi and Kushina to the story/harem. I only ask this cuz there are barely any ficus that have Sasuke/Kushina and basically none with him doing a Fem.Kyuubi. 



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  • From Sef on April 21, 2017

    eh, I think you missed a trick not having Tsunade roast him.

    Could have made her a mature sex-bomb that put him and his ego in place a bit. It takes more than sticking a big dick in someone to be a 'sex-god', but whatever. 



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  • From NoHopeLeft on April 21, 2017

    This story is so good I could cry. I just had to register and leave a review, because it's the only site I found the fic. But it's so worth it. I love dominant Sasuke fics and the ones where HE has a harem are far and few between. I'm pretty much open for anything you wrote so far. Question though, will there woman who are more submissive than others? Hinata for example. While people like Anko probably like a good spanking etc.

    Otherwise: whoa at the writing pace! Please keep going, I'll read every single chapter!



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  • From averagejoe32 on April 21, 2017

    Anyway you could femgara into the story.



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  • From LemonLover23 on April 19, 2017

    Great story love it

     

    I do have suggestions tho for women

     

    1 - mei terumi

    2 - tsunade 

    3 - Fem Kyuubi 

    4 - kushina 

    5 - mito uzumaki 

     

    I would love to see these 5 in the story. Thanks



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  • From glk on April 19, 2017

    Interesting idea. Having a post-series Sasuke as the traveling wanderer who gets a harem during his travels is something I haven't seen before. Seeing as you're planning on using a character that died in canon like Mabui, could you use Konan later? I think she'd fit really well in here considering she's an important character from another village.



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