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Reviews for The Villains' Plaything

By : Raze
  • From Lucius-Walker on February 03, 2020

    I would recommend using something like Google Docs. It's free, gives you lots of space, and you can organize your documents very easily. 

     

    That being said, I do hope for more chapters soon! 


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  • From SPG on March 30, 2017

    damn, i really wanted to see some of the 'main course' with kushina. i hope you will update soon and if possible that the next chapter's lemon would be long


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  • From grizzlyking92 on March 30, 2017

    definatly want moe rochi/kushina.


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  • From AFFModerator on December 31, 2016

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  • From AFFModerator on December 31, 2016

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  • From Bageltiger on December 29, 2016

    Ah Flashback no jutsu the infamous technique that is only second to the all powerful talk no jutsu.


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  • From C_Wade on December 29, 2016

    Hey there, 

    good on you for writing your first fanfiction. It's always nice to see new writers popping up.

    I really like the plot so far, and except for a few spelling/grammar issues, I don't see anything wrong with it.

    Personally, when I'm writing on my phone, which is not often, I use either the google docs app directly, or Jota, which is available for android. 

    I hope you will continue this, are you going to include the villains from the movies/fillers as well? if so I would really like to see a scene with Shinnou (from the Bonds movie, with the Zero-Tails). If not maybe a scene with Nagato, where he wants to rebuild the Uzumaki clan (or something).


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  • From david15 on December 29, 2016

    this is great I cant wait to see more


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  • From Arctureschap98 on December 29, 2016

    So far so good. I've been waiting for something like this.


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