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Reviews for Drunken Mistakes and Consequences

By : Lost Miles
  • From Pepper on December 02, 2016

    Wow, I wasn't 100% sure what to think when I clicked the link for this one but I really like it. I like that you force the characters to deal with the aftermath. You could have gone real indepth dealing with broken boundaries and whatnot but since this is (most likely) a oneshot I can appreciate why you'd want to do a timeskip and bypass all of that. You left a little to our imaginations at the end which I think was a wise choice. You have kinda twisted but interesting ideas. Smut was well executed and even if you didn't include it in detail it's still worth reading. Thanks for sharing!


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  • From TheDogSage on September 13, 2016

    Suggestions? I can do suggestions! If you don't mind writing certain characters in a way that could be considered OOC...

    1: Sasuke (and high-ranking Konoha officials) use extortion/blackmail (possibly something involving becoming Hokage) to force Naruto to use his Sexy no Jutsu to have have kids with Sasuke.

    2: Danzo kidnaps Aranami and forces her to pleasure men (including himself) to break her spirit so he can make her a weapon.

    3: Naruto (training in his Sexy no Jutsu to ensure he's able to use it in battle) spars with Gai and Lee, and the adrenaline and rampaging emotions from the combat causes them to engage in a three-way.

    4: Kiba, overly aroused due to the canines/female Inuzuka being in heat, is teased by Naruto in his Sexy no Jutsu as a prank. His overly aroused state causes Kiba to jump the female Naruto, who quickly loses the will to resist due to a combo of the smell of the Inuzuka being in heat and Kyuubi subtly messing with her hormones. (others, including dogs/other Inuzuka men can join in if desired).

    5: Doing the usual "make the genin 16 during the events of part 1", during the "Forest of Death" portion of the Chuunin exams Aranami is drugged and assaulted by Zaku and Dosu of the Sound Team.

    6: Inoichi, Skikaku, and Chouza use some method (Yamanaka mind techniques, drugs, something else) to make Naruto use his Sexy no Jutsu and become their personal sex slave. After a time, they release "her" after ensuring he has no memory of what happened, and "she" is left confused and unsure why "she" is currently stuck in his female form and pregnant.

    7: At a party of the "Konoha 12", everyone gets drunk and engage in an orgy, which results in Aranami pregnant and unsure of who the father of her child is.


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  • From Nescafevh on September 10, 2016

    Are you going to continue this or is it an one-shot? I'd love to see what happens next!


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