Reviews for Up and Out

BY : Blackkitten23

  • From CrypticRebel on October 22, 2017

    Loving this story and It would be cool if you have Shikamaru and Shino join the group cause judging by the Harem you plan on having Hinata join and those boys always seem to smart to not clue in that something isn't right but its your story and I'm just along for the awesome ride.........looking forward to the next update!



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  • From Cevandri on July 02, 2017

    Hmmm, This is one of the more possible stories related to Naruto.... rather than dark go happy go this feels more like what a shinobu world with chakra and stuff would feel like

    Keep up the good work!



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  • From Reader-Of-Fate on February 05, 2017

    keep it up if you ever upload ths to normal please tell me if you allready have plz tell me your user name so i can get the latestes chapter on upload

     



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  • From ANON - Wow~! on September 26, 2016

    Well damn. Didn't expect to find a good fic on this site. It seems to cater to three fetishes, that I have no interest in. Anywho, great job thus far. Btw, Kudos on having plot in your fic. ;)

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  • From York on September 25, 2016

    You're a real tease I feel this chapter was a little short compared to some of your other works but it's still good a lot better than most stories on this site



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  • From Velicol on September 07, 2016

    Oh my wow love. That is quit the way to starta  story and I have read all of the stories you have yay!!!!!! All good I'm so happy.



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  • From York on August 10, 2016

    Damn evil sarutobi is worse the canon danzo shit I like this twist I hope you update soon



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