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  • From ANON - kushina on March 13, 2022

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  • From kole on July 31, 2019

    id love to see some goddesses, and demons, also kryptonians, if he has their genes, kaguya, yami, amaterasu, kami, all bijus, other kunoichi,. also fic to write in future mikoto is fucked by civillians, old and young, males and females, gangbangs and all lol, mikoto enjoys it and starts bringing other women in starting with kushina, and more after that all women gangbanged and all single and multiple fucked by young and old women, old and young men, even futas lol it would be hot lol


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  • From kole on July 31, 2019

    id love to see some goddesses, and demons, also kryptonians, if he has their genes, kaguya, yami, amaterasu, kami, all bijus, other kunoichi,. also fic to write in future mikoto is fucked by civillians, old and young, males and females, gangbangs and all lol, mikoto enjoys it and starts bringing other women in starting with kushina, and more after that all women gangbanged and all single and multiple fucked by young and old women, old and young men, even futas lol it would be hot lol


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  • From ANON - All For One on April 20, 2019

    Very interesting story, I personally like the theme of Naruto getting revenge by making Kushina and her daughters his slaves. 

    Please, I’m begging you, add a scene of a foursome withKushina and her daughters, a good one, just like you know

    Very good story, please update again soon, and the rest of your stories,PLEASE!


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  • From LUCIFER-X5 on January 06, 2019

    please friend come up soon the next chapter I'm dying to read the continuation


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  • From LUCIFER-X5 on January 06, 2019

    hello how I hope you are well hey I just read this story completely and it is very good I hope you can upload more chapter soon please because I'm dying to read the continuation luck.

    ps: you know if you can in this story if in case you do crossever put girls like erza, mirajene, juvia, lucy, rias, akeno, kuroka, serafall, grayfia and venelana or you could make a story with these girls with naruto as protagonist please wait and consider it and take this idea or suggestion into account


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  • From MastaK on November 25, 2018

    nice, about time you updated, was worried that you were gone for a moment, awesome job so far keep going and add more chapters and girls-women (hope you know what I mean by that, ;) ;) )


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  • From NatDrake on November 24, 2018

    Would you do the one with Raikage banging the MILFs of Konoha. Really excited to see him break the mothers of their heroes.

     

    Also would love to have a MinaKushiMiko one. There so little of this pairing and would be glad if some magic is brought to this.


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  • From emilbootanimefreak on June 20, 2017

    I find it weird that despite the death of one of their own family member and Minato loosing his Hokage position because of the death of said family member that the entire family isn't exactly broken up about it? I mean I would have expected that the sibling who killed him would have at least felt some remorse and even if they tried to hide maybe by using that guilt would have made breaking the girls more dramatic and such. Anyways will any of the genin girls (Sakura, Tenten, Ino) or even some of the younger girls (Hanabi, Moegi) will be added as his slave?


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  • From Splorneshk on September 12, 2016

    Could you have one where (living)Minato bangs Mikoto and a bunch of girls from Kumo after finding out what Kushina's been "up to"?

    A harem of Minato x Mikoto x Samui x Karui x Mabui x Yugito


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  • From LordVitiate on August 22, 2016

    Okay, I can finally review now.

    I have to admit I love the sasuke fics and this naruto fic isn't bad at all(I dislike naruto and this is a really good smut fic).

    Quesitons.

    How can on get in contact with you?

    Is this on fanficiton?

    Can I mess with this and if anything comes out be credited to you?

    Challange?

    ichigo x his sisters? I'm in a rush while typeing this so yeah not really the greatest of ideas at the moment.


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  • From Preggyfan on August 14, 2016

    Great story. Btw what is your name on wattpad. Opfer1982lamm(at)gmx(dot)de


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  • From pitbull4567 on August 08, 2016

    Amazing chapter


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  • From Silber-D-Wolf on August 07, 2016

    great chapter


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  • From sneak13579 on August 07, 2016

    What is Naruto Hayubsa about? 


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