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By : LordOfLust
  • From Indubitably on April 01, 2024

    I still think about this from time to time. I hope you come back and finish writing it at some point. 

    It is fantastic and one of the best kushina stories out there. It deserved a proper end. 


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  • From Lord's on October 12, 2023

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  • From HalloweenJackal-w- on January 06, 2020

    Please keep writing this story it is really good.

    Just a quick suggestion but what if Kumo, or more specifically Samui, were to capture Naruto. 

    If they couldn't gain the Uzumaki bloodline through Kushina then they would do so through her son. 

    However fun fact the Uzumaki were known for many things such as their longevity, endurance, ever lasting stamina, fast healing, stupidly enormous amount of chakra reserves and enhanced physical condition to that of a normal shinobi/kunoichi. This made him a natural born stud, with his fast healing he could replenish more cum than what he shot out. His endurance and stamina let him keep going for hours on end. Due to his large amounts of chakra and natural physical condition it granted him a sculpted body below his baggy clothing, a large 9 inch cock and an equally large set of balls that are still growing. 

    However that is as far as the good news goes. Ya see this is a bit on the heavier side but what if...during the invasion as Samui took him away Kushina had lost all focus on her son, concentrating solely on her students, even after the invasion Naruto was no more than a fleeting memory as she rewarded he students for dealing with the enemy forces and even after that she interrogated the captured enemy shinobi (male not female) thru sexual interrogation. It was during one of these sessions that she got the information from one of the Kumo Jonin about her son's kidnapping. It dawn on her the terrible truth and she rushed out to look for him. 

    She found him in some cabin out in the woods, were he stripped from all his clothes kneeling on the ground with both his arms hanged from the ceiling keeping him from falling. His body was littered in cuts and whip marks. He was connected to some sort of machine, it had a piston that went straight into his ass probing directly into his prostate and sending electrical currents into it, making him forcefully cum in very painful way. Attached to the machine there was a milking machine that was attached directly to his cockhead with tube going directly into his uretha, forcefully sucking him of every drop of cum in his balls. There were also number of needles stabbed into his body , on his arms, balls and cock. However the worst part was what they had done to his cock and balls. In order to successfully cripple Konoha they had made sure that they couldn't gain any more descendants from him by beating his balls and cock black and blue almost into a paste. His balls were deformed, on some places swelling up like balloons and on other being as flat as a pancake with a foot indentation on them. Naruto was immediately put into intensive care while also putting him in a medical induce coma as ever time he would wake up he would scream up in agony. There was only one sole solution for this tragedy to get Tsunade back and do a high risk reconstructive surgery along with the use of her own Hundred Seal to boost dramatically his healing and be able to once more have working genitalia. 

    During this entire thing Kushina had all but completely lost touch with her students, blaming herself and her selfishness into letting g such a horrible thing happen to her own child. 

    With the surgery being a complete success and the newly added hundred seal placed directly in his navel. During the healing process Kushina had made a deal with the Kyuubi (it can change from male to female, doesn't have a set gender) and begged for it's assistance to prevent such a thing from happening again so she passed it's chakra to Naruto to speed up his recovering, it had the unknown effect of turning him more animalistic similar to that of the Inuzuka but even further more. Gaining animal traits himself and enhancing his body further. The deal was that she will now be Naruto's and by extension it's bitch. 

    If by luck you or anyone wants to contact me to discuss this idea: 

    jack0lantern0w0 @ gmail . com 

    This is the email address I normally use for this kind of discussions


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  • From Jack_blackfyre on December 19, 2019

    Please come back to this story it is the best story on here and it was only getting better as you wrote more 


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  • From dbray98 on November 25, 2019

    you should give naruto a big dick, about 9 inches, because fuck kiba, he is an asshole, i kinda want naruto to find out about his mother, be disgusted with her and to her face call her a slut, and if she tries anything with samui, he'll tell everyone about what she does, including minato who will lose some reputation, and she will lose all her rep and people will think shes a whore and stuff


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  • From Lucius-Walker on April 22, 2019

    Really loving this smut story so far! It's quite unique too, with Kushina being a comlete slut for basically everyone, but especially towards her students. 

    Hoping for more chapters soon! 


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  • From Jairis on April 03, 2019

    Thanks for the great story!

    LordOfLust, you said that you will rewrite this story, so maybe one day we will see a new better version (or maybe a new chapters for this one).

     

    I would like to make a few suggestions for the story (sorry for my bad English and Google translate):

    Well, we have Kiba who sees Naruto as his rival, Komachi wanting to surpass the hokage and Takako who simply has a crush on Kushina - maybe in the new version he will be also a fan of Yondaime and team Kushina's relationships may become more interesting.

    I would also like to see the development of Kushina's (and her students as well) skills aimed at keeping their secret (and their lives too) safe. Special jutsus to block sounds and smells, stealth skills, maybe even medical ninjutsu to change at least child hair color to red or blond if Kushina becomes pregnant or even attempts to use hokage's mansion security systems to hide her numerous affairs (of course, changes in security should be easily explained - Minato is very skillful shinobi and sealmaster and he will certainly notice them). The main thing here is to follow logic and common sense, and not to create absurd or impossible jutsus or skills.

    I don't think Minato should come home late all the time – one month he can be overwhelmed by paperwork and be almost free from it next, so Minato is unlikely to constantly return at night. There are also diplomatic trips, meetings and other occasions (inspections, for example) – and sometimes he will be absent from the village. And training and sparrings (maybe even spars with Kushina – she is very strong as well) – Hokage is the strongest shinobi in the village after all.

    I hope that Minato and Kushina’s sexual life will be quite active (most times, at least) and Minato will not be a bad lover – it’s just Kushina’s students are good and will eventually surpass him. 

    Also Kushina can create a place that is constantly protected from prying eyes at the training ground instead of using earth wall jutsu. It will be good for rest (and much more).

    If Kiba and Naruto still fight in new version, there is easy way to lose for Naruto – he may be exhausted or injured after previous fight (it will be interesting if Kushina loses the bet on her anal virginity because she thought her son would win – he is a strongest Genin after all)

     

    This story is really amazing, certainly one of the best smut-fics - and I really hope that you will continue it. Do not stop writing this story, please!


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  • From Jack_blackfyre on March 25, 2019

    Please update this. Its the best kushina story on here 

     


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  • From KinaCunt on October 21, 2018

    If Komachi rubbed his dick onto Minato's sandwich, wouldn't that Minato ate Komachi's dick?


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  • From Lord on October 16, 2018

    Please continue 


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  • From ANON - Anon on October 11, 2018

    Hey can I be in the story


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  • From Lord on October 07, 2018

    Would be nice to see a solo konohamaru chapter 


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  • From Lord on October 07, 2018

    Lordoflust please I've seen your review on burn my dread and I beg you to keep writing and not care about the negative reviews I really enjoy this book


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  • From darkfox72 on July 12, 2018

    I'm new to this website but so far your story is the best one I have read and I have read a lot on fanfiction and I got to say its brilliant and I can't wait for the next chapter and I wnted to give an idea that I think might be interesting you can use if you want like eventually kushina will get caught by anko and being her she would want to join in so she and kushina would have sex with the boys and it will be a rivalry between the two of them to see who is better and then somewhere down the line kurenai will get involved but because she likes asuma sh would demand that the person she has sex with were a condom and since there are three boys and girls they will have a contest between them like the girl would have a contest to see who can get the boys to cum first they split into pairs and the boys would see who can last the longest with out Cumming first and the boy who cums first is out but the girl who made him cum wins and the winners get to choose what they want to do with the other like anko could demand some s and m or kibe could fuck kurenai without a condom but still has to pull out and the guy would vote on the girls and tell them what there best at like anko is the best at blow job's and kurenai has the wettest and hot pussy and kushina has the tightest and rides the best and they would judge the boys to I really want that too happen just the six of them for the time being and add people later like lee and tsume


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  • From Darkdream on December 16, 2017

    I just read the story "Burn My Dread (Stop Teasing Us Sensei AU)".
    The reviews of it are not so kind towards your work, so I just wanted to tell you that I really like it despite my critics. Like I said, you have a great writing style and do something different from "Naruto/Sasuke is a god and gets all the girls" fiction. I don't think that you bashed him too much, he just lost against Kiba, that is all.

    This is an AU after all, and most important it is all about Smut. I don't expect and certainly don't want a pure sex oriented story being taken too seriously.

    In fact, I don't remember Stories where Kiba get any luck with Kushina before. I like the way he is an ass hole towards Naruto and is still fucking Kushina. (The more she is dominated the better) ;-)

    Please keep up the great work!


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