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Reviews for The Best Man

By : Ragingmaelstorm
  • From ANON - farhan on October 31, 2016

    Great story, please continue the series, make slow progression and  make the sex seens last longer.


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  • From Splorneshk on October 19, 2016

    I'm Tyro...Naruto, and fuck the Uchiha clan! I'm here to fuck this man's (future)wife! Long dick style...


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  • From ANON - Pretty good damn on August 21, 2016

    Pretty damn good


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  • From York on August 18, 2016

    It's a damn shame this story never saw a second chapter this was one of the few fics that didn't kiss fuckboy sasuke's ass


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  • From ANON - illnek on December 16, 2015
    Dude I Literally Beg you. Write more stories of girls cheating with naruto on their boyfriends/husbands.
    Getting sick of FICS where girls Are cheating on naruto With other guys And makes him pathetic and take's him for granted... We want more of this fics... Continue
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  • From JLDavenport on December 14, 2015
    Loved this, fun, naughty and nice to see things going this way for once instead of always the other. Would love to see more from you, hoping you've got more ideas in a similar vein to this one!
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  • From ANON - labeled5150 on September 06, 2015
    dude m with you there needs to be more fanfic of the girls cheating there husband with naruto u did a great job just wish it was longer please continue ths or do nother one like it
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  • From Akki on July 17, 2015
    I love your story bro. the most NTR I have seen is about naruto getting cheated on by hinata or sakura. I kinda hate that, so its the second or third fanfiction I have read where its sasuke. so plz continue writing looking forward to chapter 2
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  • From Kenshinryuu on June 14, 2015
    I love Sakura cheating on Sasuke, plus Naruto being engaged to Hinata and still plowing Ino. Very hot.
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  • From AFFModerator on June 13, 2015

    Please correct your disclaimer.


    Your disclaimer doesn't have one of the two parts we need to see. It must say that no money/profit is made. Saying that it’s just for fun or just for entertainment purposes is not enough.


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  • From TheWarlockofChaos on June 13, 2015
    Nice job, Ragingmaelstrom. I liked the story quite a bit and while I like stories where Naruto is cheated upon it doesn't mean I don't like where is he the one cheating too. I hope that this is not just a one-shot with what Naruto and Ino implied is going to happen later after the wedding.
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  • From Seele01 on June 13, 2015
    It's true you don't see cheating fics like this very often. Most of the time Naruto is the one getting cheated on. I find it funny how well received this one is. I guess people really want to see Naruto get back at people. That or people really dislike Sasuke. For a first story this one wasn't too bad. It was strange to see Sasuke talk so much. The surprise twist at the end was nice and it felt like it left the door open for more. NTR with Naruto coming out on top seems to be a under used genre. Hope to see more in the future like this one.

    I do find it interesting your name is raging maelstrom. While another author is called ragingspeed who is known for writeing cheating fic that involve hinata cheating on naruto. Well i hope we see some more naruto sakura cheating in the future.
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  • From snake1980 on June 13, 2015
    I have to say not bad for the chapter im looking forward to see what will happen next after the wedding.
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