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Reviews for Special Training Indeed

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  • From Shadeirion on May 03, 2015
    Great story so far, do love the premise and hope you update soon. Maybe have Naruko be joined by some other girls afterwards. Make Jiraiuya some kind of harem master :) I do love the thought of kinky stuff like say sisters, maybe have naruko use clones?
    Keep up the good work.
    cheers
    Shadeirion
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  • From sneaky666 on May 03, 2015
    Very nice,you intend to do other male and female character?
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  • From TheWarlockofChaos on May 03, 2015
    Awesome story premise. I really like how you are actually having Jiraiya slowly seduce her instead of just straight out taking her. Could you also have Jiraiya several years ago back before the Kyuubi attack enjoy a threesome with Kushina and Mikoto. I do not mean he should be Naruko's father or anything like that but I would like it if in the past he had enjoyed her mother, Kushina servicing him whenever Minato wasn't around. Basically I think it would be cool if Jiraiya compared Naruko to Kushina in his mind as he seduces and trains her.
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  • From AFFModerator on May 02, 2015

    Please correct your disclaimer.


    Your disclaimer doesn't have one of the two parts we need to see. It must say that no money/profit is made. Saying that it’s just for fun or just for entertainment purposes is not enough.


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  • From jj on May 02, 2015
    plz write more breed her good
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