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Reviews for Distortion

By : Hiti67
  • From ANON - Anon on December 20, 2015
    This is a brilliant story! I've never seen another story where Naruto screws his own clone after giving her a personality of her own: Pure Genius. And three part with his darkness was well done too! Extremely well done, and I hope there is more to come.
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  • From ANON - RAWR on October 15, 2015
    Great to see you back in action. I loved the first chapter, and might've enjoyed this one even more. I do so hope your muse is kind to you(and us!), and continues to provide. :D
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  • From ANON - firetemplar415 on October 15, 2015
    Loved the Sasuke dig at his mother, it was hilarious! Lol.
    But was a bit lost on the scene of menmas and narutos scene in random girls bedroom.
    Idk if you meant to state who random girl was or not but hinted some things but nothing clear. If you could clear it up on a future author note, it would be greatly appreciated.

    Can't wait for new chapters :)this seems like a twisted but fun story to read, lol.
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  • From ANON - LoneVisored on October 13, 2015
    Great stuff. Both with the sex scene and the change in canon events. Looking forward to what you come up with next.
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  • From ANON - Lord foul on April 30, 2015
    Interesting concept, hope it continues
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  • From ANON - Garsdal on April 23, 2015
    This. Story.
    IT NEEDS MORE CHAPTERS!! OMFG, i thought good Adult Naruto fanfiction was dead around here, and here you pop along and slap my face in with this smutty literary masterpiece.
    to rework the quote of the newly dubbed 'Dark essence of Naruto' Yume, "“Oh god yessss…I gotta get me some MORE of that.”"
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  • From AFFModerator on April 19, 2015

    Please correct your disclaimer.


    Your disclaimer doesn't have one of the two parts we need to see. It must say that no money/profit is made. Saying that it’s just for fun or just for entertainment purposes is not enough.


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  • From ANON - Silly on April 13, 2015
    So good! I'd love to read the sequel!
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  • From ANON - Wulf on April 13, 2015
    Amazing fic. I love how, well, distorted it is. Not quite disturbing, but certainly a bit twisted. Anyway, if you have the time, please let me know when you add more to this.
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