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Reviews for Breaking Down Walls

By : Tales-of-the-Wolfblade
  • From ANON - robert on December 31, 2015
    Well things seem to be heating up i wonder if naruto will save the hokage or just grab hinata and the others and leave
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  • From ANON - Miki on December 14, 2015
    That last chapter is shit. Using that bloody super-sharingan control crap is a story killer period. The sharingan is bad enough in cannon, but that one in plain ridiculous and was a miserable creation. Daring to use it is worse. I loved that story, now I hate it. Congratulation!!! (that was sarcasme in case you didn't get-it)
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  • From ANON - Anon E. Moose on December 11, 2015
    Well, that last chapter was damn disapointing. It was the inclusion of the deus ex machina in the form of Shisui's sharingan that ruined it.

    Really, an unblockable way to make someone follow your will unconditionally and that works on everybody? Fucking stupid.
    Bad enough that canon has the normal sharingan be able to everything the user needs, and has it trump bijuu's conciousness even when it's not rinnegan or even mangekyou, but Shisui's eye takes the cake; it's totally broken for no explained reason and so comes across as an extremely cheap copout.

    Including it here the way you did really brings the story down; even if the situation gets resolved somehow it is still bad and unnecessary.
    And the huge diversion from 'normal' with so many now dead really makes no damn sense the way it was described here. As in, there is no pressing reason for Danzo and he's basically telling everyone "Come at me, bro!". And Naruto will suffer more for it than he already did. *Sigh* and it looked so promising.

    Also, the whole chapter makes non-Danzo-aligned Konoha appear borderline retarded, at least lobotomized. Just like canon. Two important figures vanish and nobody notices or reacts? Danzo has extensive personnel and infrastructure and can go about his sinister business unmolested? WTF?
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  • From ANON - robert on December 10, 2015
    Dam this is not looking goood for naruto glad you updated and cant wait to see what happens next. either way even if all the blames goes to danzo naruto will not be getting of the hook so easy
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  • From ANON - P3rf3ct_Zer0 on November 11, 2015
    I truly love this series its a complete reverse take on the Naruto universe. Don't you dare stop writing :P
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  • From ANON - robert on November 08, 2015
    ok so danzo kicked nap naruto i wonder what is going to happen here is hoping naruto kills most if not all is root
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  • From ANON - Heika on November 03, 2015
    How is Inari alive?

    overwhelming manpower then; is it simply for

    will there be a Tsunami lemon?

    Let me guess the need for the Sharingan is too great an ‘asset’ to throw away right?”
    …how is it being thrown away when it would be being used for mass production?

    idiot Naruto probably got arrested for the monster he is.” Sakura boasted
    why has she gone 180 from wave?

    If you can why don’t you tell him?” Naruto said nodding his chin towards Sasuke
    What truth?

    Why is Kakashi against Naruto?

    Were the Elders killed for treason?

    I will give a more through review later but this is it for now.

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  • From DiabloSlayer on October 23, 2015
    What the hell? I clicked on this story thinking it looked good. And I was right. It was good. So I kept reading and it stayed good. Then I got to the last chapter and out of nowhere the story is suddenly loaded with cliches. I'll wait for the next chapter before I pass judgment but if this is the direction you're going I'm not sticking around.
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  • From ANON - robert on October 21, 2015
    Nice chapter i wonder if the hokage lied to naruto to stop if from freaking out and if so does he still believe in naruto or is he against him to? i wonder if naruto will help either sakura or sasuke when orchimaru attacks I for one hope he doesn't.
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  • From ANON - robert on October 05, 2015
    Very nice chapter i have a feeling they are going to try and convince haku to be with sasuke if the "old fucks" are the village elders and danzo also i wonder if neji said anything to the main family or if hinata is getting trained she they heard how she did
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  • From ANON - Wyrtha on October 05, 2015
    Very interesting. I'm surprised the Hokage hadn't tried to talk to him about what he found out and of course the Uchiha. I'm very interested to find out what Mr.Teamwork is going to do about Sasuke ... if anything or if he sweeps it under the rug and forces Naruto to work with the psycho.

    By the way nice working in what happened during the massacre as the explained a lot.
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  • From ANON - Anon E. Moose on October 02, 2015
    Going OK so far, but why would Naruto not tell Hayate about being left behind or being threatened by Leaf shinobi after helping them?
    At least have him try to get Hayate alone to tell him, since if he does not tell how could Hayate know?
    Naruto needs allies in Konoha and especially ones that have the trust of the hokage so not telling him, or someone else, not even trying to, is really stupid.
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  • From ANON - Wyrtha on October 01, 2015
    Very interesting story. Like that it's breaking away from the original story here. I hope Sasuke is kicked out of the program ... though I don't see how he would have been able to ensnare Hinata so easily. I mean, he just awakened his Sharingan ... though since Naruto wasn't with him to help him against Haku like they do in the story he shouldn't have even awoken it since he should have been easily defeated and he couldn't have done it without someone helping him learn how to do it or give him help in doing it. But it's your story, just don't think the Byakugan would fall to a cheap trick so easy especially with so many others around to see him approach her like her teammates he should have sensed something wrong unless one or both were in on it.
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  • From ANON - guest on September 30, 2015
    Did naruto and hinata have sex before the others arrived it said she was wearing his black shirt but didnt say about anything else
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  • From ANON - robert on September 30, 2015
    Nice story so far glad naruto and kurma are getting along and nice to know naruto is showing that he is strong. Sort of sad that Tsunami was raped but glad she didnt get pregnant, also glad you decide not to let hinata get raped. Cant wait to see what naruto will do to sasuke and kakashi and here is hoping that hinata and haku dont get rapped. P.S. Loved the way haku said she didnt mind being called a slut since she is naruto's slut
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