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Reviews for Demon's Dirty Dreams

By : MathiasBlue
  • From LUCIFER-X5 on June 01, 2018

    Continuation please 


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  • From porphyra on October 24, 2017

    Missing apostrophe:
    crush's, not crushes 


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  • From porphyra on October 24, 2017

    Something is up with the formatting, every paragraph have tripple spacing or something between them.


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  • From ANON - Robert on October 12, 2016

    I hope this story will continue would love to see naruto add more girls hinata, temari, ino, hana, kurenai, anko just to name a few


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  • From ANON - Desturion on September 21, 2016

    Really nice work, I like this immoral Naruto =)


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  • From ANON - robert on April 26, 2016
    How to see this updated is a good story would love to see where you take this
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  • From ANON - On-Eno on August 13, 2015
    Kinda surprised that you didn't go the anal route this chapter. After all, it would be a great punishment-she'd wonder why her ass was sore upon waking!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 11, 2015
    Good story. Keep the chapters coming.
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  • From porphyra on July 23, 2015
    Correction:
    blonde - blond (without 'e' when male)
    boys - boy's (it's possessive not plural)
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  • From ANON - Billy on July 12, 2015
    Stories like this are reasons why I still come here to this site :3
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  • From granreycero on May 29, 2015
    Heh, this was a pretty nice find. You're a pretty good writer. Eagerly waiting for more.
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  • From ANON - Tim on May 26, 2015
    Now chaptzer 5 is fucking interesting.
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  • From ANON - Tim on May 26, 2015
    Best story of the bunch.
    What can I say I like pwp.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 08, 2015
    So what did the smoke do to Kin?

    So why did Tsunami call him Naruto-sama when he did not use the smoke on her?

    So the smoke when used on someone sleeping makes them think better of Naruto…poor Hinata lol. Would the Tenseigan, Rin’negan, or Satorigan (Juubi’s eye) be able to see him in smoke form?

    next chapter that I'll do Kin and Tayuya.
    FTW!

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  • From VotedforKodos on May 07, 2015
    I disagree with other reviewers. If you want Naruto to have an actual relationship in this, that's fine, but it would either have to be someone amoral enough to have no issue with what he does, oblivious enough to never find out, or someone who gets seriously fogged until they are just his doll. One of the worst things a story can do is talk about how ruthless and awful a character is, then immediately turn around and have him fall in love with someone after 5 minutes. I've seen a decent villain protagonist Naruto ruined by "falling in love" with Hinata immediately in the chuunin exams, after being raised by Orochimaru of all people.

    That said, having read your stories, I trust you know what you're doing. One point of curiosity, Naruto doesn't feel guilt for things he's doing now, but what about things he did that he felt guilty about before? Like Hinata, the possibility of fathering children who never know him, etc. Will he still have those feelings, or just the knowledge that he DID have them, and have to decide how to act on those facts?
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