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Reviews for Miscalculations

By : Xiophelia
  • From ANON - tsuzuke on May 05, 2013
    I comepletely agree with G's entire review. It felt like Naruto and Sasuke wanted each other more than anthing elsem and Kakashi just didn't seem to sense that. Also it seemed like Sasuke could care less if his realationship with Kakashi ended. Uhg, this story made me feel so bad for Naruto. Still I enjoyed it and I loved the ending!^^
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  • From NAnderson on May 02, 2013
    Ohhhhh that was such a tease! The story was moving so beautifully and getting so good. Then BAM! Cliffy. How can you end a chapter right there?! Ah I really hope that complete you have listed just means that you're done typing and that wasn't where it end. Because if it is, it feels completely incomplete.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 02, 2013
    Okay, I'm hooked. Oh please, phrase, please continue this story.
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  • From ANON - G on May 02, 2013
    Wait. "Complete"?

    They never cleared up the misunderstanding. The story ends just at the moment when Naruto and Sasuke are going to discuss their feelings. It felt like everything in the story was just lead up to that moment, and then it never happens!

    Don't get me wrong. I think the idea of this is fabulous. Fics where Sasuke comes home always have him rooming with whoever the other half of the pairing is. I thought it was awesome that an interloper (Kakashi) showed up and messed up that scenario. Naruto wanted it to be him that Sasuke would be placed with, assumed no one else would be considered for the job, but then in the end, Kakashi got the job. I could totally understand Naruto's hurt and frustration.

    Hmmmm... Maybe it's better you didn't continue. The story ends on a question mark, whether Naruto will be able to accept sharing Sasuke or not. Which is good because to be honest with you, I don't believe he could. Kakashi says he wanted Naruto just as much as he wanted Sasuke, but Naruto only really wanted Sasuke. He thought Kakashi was hot, thought the sight of Kakashi and Sasuke together was hot, and even imagined himself having sex with the both of them, but the guy he was thinking of throughout the whole fic was Sasuke. All his dreams were about Sasuke, all the prostitutes he bought looked like Sasuke, it was Sasuke he wanted to confess his feelings to...Sasuke Sasuke Sasuke. He didn't have the same kind of emotional reaction to Kakashi, not even close. If Naruto accepted the idea of a threesome, it would probably be just so he could have Sasuke, Kakashi would be nothing more than a bonus.

    I think a lot of the emotion on Sasuke's side was also fixated much more on Naruto rather than being shared equally with Kakashi. Sasuke's relationship with Kakashi started going down the drain after the misunderstanding at the baths and Sasuke seemed to blame Kakashi for it. If their side of the threesome was really that strong, it would have been able to withstand Naruto's rejection.

    So what is Kakashi in this situation but an interloper? He's supposed to be a nice guy here, but I think it would have been interesting if he'd been a little bit of a villain in the story. Like if he knew Naruto and Sasuke wanted each other more than they want him, and that they would have been better off to just be with each other, but he saw an opportunity to be with both of them and forced his way in.
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