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  • From ANON - Anon on July 11, 2015
    Amazing and incredibly hot!
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  • From HalfBane on April 20, 2015
    Wow just amazing I had been waiting for more to be add, and low and behold you answer my prayers lol.
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  • From ANON - KTlovesmoney on December 23, 2014
    I Give This Chapter A 96/100
    Here's an Idea for a Chapter:
    What if Cherry/Tayuya got a little Too careless when Training Slut/Tsume and Bitch/Hana and they tried to escape,
    only to be caught by Anko, who then punishes all three of them, two for trying to escape and the other for letting it happen.
    But the punishment given by Anko is very light compared to what Naruko does once Anko tells her what happened,
    I'm not sure about what she should do to Cherry/Tayuya, but here's my idea for what she should do with Slut/Tsume and Bitch/Hana:
    She should attach her new Special Strap-on to Slut/Tsume and test it on Bitch/Hana and check to make sure it work like she hopes for.
    This way Naruko can kills two birds with one stone, or in this case, two Bitches with one Strap-on:
    by punishing them and making sure she will be able to give Tsunade all the "Daughters" either one could want.
    (Since X-X times X-X will always=X-X and can never=X-Y, unless the Seals can change X-(X-Female DNA) into X-(Y-Male DNA) so they can have Sons or maybe Futas(Have both Male and Female genitals)which you might add to the story). Also what if Naruko fake Haku's(Who turned-out to Futa)Death an enslaved her.
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  • From ANON - xXxHentai69xXx on July 07, 2014
    Great story; nice, steady, plot development with lots of fun... The amount of humiliation and torture is just plain stupid (which some people might like). I find SOME chapters disturbing (being forced to drink pee? EW!). The amount of bondage though, is very consensual and make the experience pleasant. Naruko's character I especially like, first a nieve sister... then a full blown slave owner... -!!!!SPOLIER ALERT!!!!- then she gets transformed by her older sister. The teasing here and there is acutely delectable.

    10/10 Great job author, I thank you for your time, and dedicated. =)
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  • From ANON - sfdv on May 24, 2014
    please update this story. its the best one i have read on this site.
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  • From ANON - sfdv on May 24, 2014
    please update this story. its the best one i have read on this site.
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  • From ANON - Ferocity on March 23, 2014
    Damnnnnn!!! Can you believe I'm actually still reading this for the story (although that's in no way to say I don't enjoy the smut :P)
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 25, 2013
    I am here for teh lolz.
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  • From zamkotje on July 14, 2013
    I LOVE this story, but I must admit you would probably get more feedback at hentai foundry since they lean more het/yuri/futa than aff's yaoi heavy population.
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  • From MasterGouken20xx on June 25, 2013
    Sorry about reviewing twice, in a way, but I refound my account details. I am Veyron's co-writer, as I said. And we have material ready for submitting, once I get my head round the disclaimer.
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  • From ANON - magnus on June 15, 2013
    one idea you could do would be to expand on the scene with Moegi. Maybe have Hanabi capture her, Anko break her, then have them give her to their mistress as a gift.
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  • From ANON - Anttolas on June 10, 2013
    as Always a great chapter, love the mother daugther incest, and absolutley loved the cake mixing, and the fact that the cakes will be used in a party, oh damn i loved that, i will be waiting for the next chapter, see ya then
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  • From DiabloSlayer on June 09, 2013
    Very nice. Please continue. And ignore DumbassLizard. You included the Rape and Torture tags and started each chapter with a reminder that the story included kidnapping and rape. They have no right to complain. Plus what kind of idiot loser seriously compares a story like this to some real world sicko? This is fantasy not reality and they need to learn to accept that. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Mars on June 08, 2013
    Please don't stop writing. I really enjoy this story and I love your creative twists. Please don't abandon all your hard work and all of your fans!
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  • From omegadelta on June 08, 2013
    loved it, hope you continue .
    best story i've read in a long time.
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