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Reviews for Maelstrom of the Dead

By : SheWhoWritesSmut
  • From Dylan_Wolf on January 15, 2018

    I love the way the story is told.


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  • From ANON - Anonymous #0137-D on September 06, 2013
    Your pacing is excellent, your spelling and grammar - while not above reproach - are without any outstanding issues, and the story looks promising so far.
    About the only issue I have is Naruto screwing up the initial encounter - he shouldn't be pulling a Dumbledore ("Dangerous situationg? Let's get the students out of this one, easily defensible location!"), and he should have put an end to the incursion on the school grounds right there, right then. However, these are only my opinions on the storyline - and opinions are, as you might know, like assholes; everyone's got one, but no one wants to hear about anybody else's.
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  • From rybalov on February 19, 2013
    Good)
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  • From Cjonbloodletter on July 30, 2012
    So far it looks damn promising. I'd read this even without the promise of smut that your pen-name assures me is coming down the line.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 28, 2012
    This is an amazing story. I look forward to reading more of it. Please continue it.
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  • From kyuubiragnrock on July 27, 2012
    good story
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