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Reviews for Trouble In Paradise

By : DevilHeart435
  • From AgentGv01 on August 14, 2012
    Personally I feel that Sakura isn't in this story enough and that you've pretty much pushed her aside which makes no sense to me giving how Naruto had been after her since the start of the series. It just doesn't make sense that the one girl he's wanted is barely in this kind of story at least give her some development time or else I might just give up on this as I'm loosing interest fast.
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  • From SirGeneralSir on July 10, 2012
    Ok so not a bad story, only thing is that i think you have too much filler, events that have no meaning story wise, funny as some of it may be, it should be relevent to the story.

    for example, the event with Konohamru *sp* and his team in the hotsprings, funny yes, but why was it there?

    will it have relevence later in that .....while in the hospital, their team leader does some thing that directly effects some thing with Naruto?

    but thats just my thoughts on it, its your story after all, take my advice or leave it.
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  • From spiritwolf35 on June 28, 2012
    Please update soon I just finished reading chapter 7 of this story from FF site and I got to read what happens next so please update soon
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  • From killjoy3000 on June 26, 2012
    i love this fic man
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  • From The_Dark_Soul_Magician on June 26, 2012
    As par number 9 in your notes. That jutsu does have a name. It's called Flying Swallow. http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Flying_Swallow
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  • From Christopher11 on June 26, 2012
    Great new chapter to the story. Hope Ino is able to 'smooth' things out with Hinata.
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  • From codywelch17 on June 20, 2012
    love this stuff!
    keep it up.
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  • From codywelch17 on June 14, 2012
    i really love this story.
    kinda glad fanfiction went nuts so i could find it on here
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  • From codywelch17 on June 14, 2012
    about ino
    i understand why it was needed i just really like ino
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  • From Xylion on June 14, 2012
    Well, I like it ^^
    Keep up the good work !
    Tchouss
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  • From codywelch17 on June 14, 2012
    aww
    why did you make ino a slut
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  • From codywelch17 on June 13, 2012
    i found my new favorite story!
    keep it up man love this stuff
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  • From DiabloSlayer on June 13, 2012
    Sweet you made it. I'll read easier knowing there's no threat of deletion. Can't wait for you to reach where you were. I'm curious to see how the Hinata/Ino/Naruto threesome gets started. Update soon. Welcome. See you later.
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