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Reviews for Just One More Kiss

By : yolotengo
  • From smint45 on November 22, 2011
    That was so HOT!!!! I totally loved it!!!
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  • From ANON - angelj232000 on November 22, 2011
    They totally are sole mates. Who is Itachi married to? Why does their father have them both marrying bitches? Their mother could not have been that bad to their father. Next chapter please.
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  • From NarutoVixin on November 22, 2011
    gods i love your writing your one of my favorit writers on here i just finished you rape fic when i saw this one had updated btw coming back to ones self after being raped or molested from that young is one of the hardest thing a servivor has to do i should know and you showed just how hard it is thank you
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  • From BlueDragon8787 on November 22, 2011
    Ohh, now that was a HOT and SEXY scene in the closet. I am so lovig this story. And I hope that Sasuke does something soon to know his bastard of a father off his pedestal. God I hate that asshole, actually condoning his "fiance" to have him followed. I want want them both to go down HARD. And I just don't like the fact that Fugaku is going to get what he wants, you know a merger, if he says yes to Sasuke and Naruko getting married. Call me crazy and selfish but I just don't want him to win at anything. He doesn't deserve it.

    Well I am loving this story and I can't wait for the next chapter.

    JJ
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  • From ANON - Bree on November 22, 2011
    I just started reading this the other day, and so far I'm really enjoying the story. I was really excited to come across a story with a trans character. But I'm not sure about how she's being represented, mostly since chapter three. Being transgendered isn't a half and half thing, and it's not surgery that legitimizes a person's gender, but it seems that because Naruko still has male sex organs, she's not seen as the woman she is, but rather as a man in women's clothing. As soon as Sasuke found out, she and Naruko became he and Naruto. Although he considers the possibility of her being trans immediately, he doesn't seem to have much understanding of what it means to be trans. And Naruko's statement really caught me off guard. "I’m a guy that likes to dress up as a girl" ...that's crossdressing - which is totally fine, except that crossdressing is not synonymous with transgenderism/transsexualism, which translate to "I'm a girl with the biological parts of a guy." And if Naruko is on hormones, I would think she'd have a somewhat firmer grasp on her gender identity. One cannot just go out and buy hormones, they need to have them prescribed. A psychologist wouldn't have started her on hormone therapy if she just enjoyed dressing up as a girl and wasn't sure she was a woman. That said, Naruko doesn't have to identify within the traditional gender binary either, but this doesn't seem to be the case for her. Besides the one odd comment, Naruko seems incredibly comfortable and sure of herself in her gender, her physical sex and her presentation.

    So...I suppose I just feel a lack of clarity and consistency around Naruko's gender identity and how it's being interpreted both by her and by Sasuke. I don't mean to get all nitpicky about a fictional representation of a fictional character xD But besides being a real issue outside of fic, it is a rather central element in the story, so I felt it was a reasonable thing to bring up.

    But like I said, the story has been great so far, and I hope I wasn't discouraging, as I can't wait to keep reading.
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  • From smint45 on November 21, 2011
    Oh they are so in love with eachother it is so sweet!!! I totally love it!!! Hope Minato will be able to work things out for the two!!!! See you again soon!!!
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  • From ANON - angelj232000 on November 21, 2011
    I can't wait to hear what Naruto's dad's offer is going to be. I want them together so bad. I know Sakura will do something bitchy. I always like to when authors make her the heal. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
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  • From NarutoVixin on November 21, 2011
    i love this tale its cute and funny keep it up
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  • From ANON - angelj232000 on November 21, 2011
    WOW!!!! I love this story. I don't want anything bad to happen to Sasuke & Naruto but problem will make them stronger. I love how you had Sasuke okay with Naruto. When I first read the 1st chapter I thought that Naruto was going to take advantage of Sasuke, but I am so glad that you did not go that root. Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the awesome work.
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  • From moodysavage on November 21, 2011
    oooooohhhhh.... this is going to be so good!!! awesome first chapter...Sasuke is soooo going to freak!
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  • From smint45 on November 20, 2011
    I really love Minato in this story he is just way better than in the last one!!! This is just the way I imagine him ^^ I so can'T wait for Sasuke and Minato to meet!!!! Hope to see you soon!!!
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  • From DenyingFatex on November 19, 2011
    It's nice to see the personality change in Minato in this one. You're doing a great job so far, keep writing! I can't wait to read more!
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  • From BlueDragon8787 on November 19, 2011
    I really liked this chapter. It was really sweet with the scene between father and son. Now Sakura that bitch needs to be put in her place, she totally ruined some good morning after cuddling and/or fucking. I hope she gets kicked to the curb soon. Really can't stand her. I hope Minato can help.

    I am really loving this story. Can't wait for the next chapter.

    JJ
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  • From MisatosPenPen on November 19, 2011
    Little happy dance! That was great. I think Naruto should have breasts, small ones. But anyway, that was awesome and I can't wait until the next chapter!
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  • From BlueDragon8787 on November 19, 2011
    Oh I really loved this chapter and that sex scene was H O T T Hot. And I am soo glad that Sasuke took the news so well. And I hope that they get married and it solves Sasuke's problem. Now I am wondering something, since Naruto is technically a "girl" I wonder if there is going to be a cat fight between him and Sakura. I always hated the way she treated Naruto and yet he never faught back or anything.

    I am totally loving this story and I can't wait for the next chapter.

    JJ
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