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Reviews for Just One More Kiss

By : yolotengo
  • From BlueDragon8787 on December 17, 2011
    OH MY GOD!!!! It started out so Hot and Smexy I loved it. Now all horrible. That crazy ass bitch, I can't believe she did that. I am glad she is dead. Where in the hell was Kiba? I hope they are going to be ok. It is too bad she is dead I would have loved to have seen her ass get thrown in jail and just fry there.

    As I was reading this story I was thinking of the previous chapter and how I forgot to write in my review that during Naruko confrentation with Itachi I could so totally see Itachi with a man dressed as a woman. So I hope you'll write a story like that either a totally seperate from this story or maybe a sequel or something.

    I totally loved this story. Can't wait for the next chapter.

    JJ
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  • From BlueDragon8787 on December 15, 2011
    Now this was a really good chapter. I am really glad that Sasuke made up with his family. And oh boy was that sex scene freaking hot, it was delicious. And that was a really sweet scene bout them having kids. I liked that and I am glad that everything is working out for them.

    I totally love this story and I can't wait for the next chapter.

    JJ
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  • From ANON - morlana on December 15, 2011
    I really like the way the story is going. Sas is so happy he's changing and even contemplating children!
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  • From ANON - angelj232000 on December 15, 2011
    I am loving this story. This chapter just made me want to know even more who the bitch is that is married to Itachi. I feel compelled to know. I love the sex between Naruko & Sasuke, it made me reolise that I will miss Naruko's cock even it Sasuke doesn't. Awesome work keep it up.
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  • From smint45 on December 14, 2011
    Wow that was kind of a twist of Naruto suddenly going through with surgery!!!! But I love this story non the less!!! I wonder what Fukaku will do when Naruto is Naruko? Can't wait for more!!!! See you again soon!!!
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  • From Madamdragon on December 13, 2011
    Well, as long as Sasuke stays with him, and they are both happy... Then I am happy for them. Hope things go well for the two, update again soon please.
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  • From BlueDragon8787 on December 12, 2011
    Oh that was a really sweet and cute chapter. Now I am just wondering that if he gets his bottom half done too I guess they are going to have use toys for when Sasuke wants to get fucked cause I know he likes it when Naruto took the lead. I can't wait to see what they are going to do next.

    I really loved this chapter and they story. Can't wait for the next chapter.

    JJ
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  • From MisatosPenPen on December 11, 2011
    Oh, I want Naruko to keep the cock. Sasuke seemed to enjoy that a bit too much to take it away . . . Nice that he's got breasts now though.
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  • From ANON - angelj232000 on December 08, 2011
    Sorry I have not had time to review. I honestly did not see the surgery coming. I am not surprised but still. I am happy that Naruto & Sasuke are happy. I am glad to hear that Itachi will redeem himself. I was thinking that he was just jealous that Sasuke was able to stand up for himself when Itachi could not seem to do it for himself when it came to the marriage thing. I am very happy that we are getting to see more of Naruto's dad & their relationship together more. Keep up the great work.
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  • From BlueDragon8787 on December 08, 2011
    WOW! I can't believe it. I felt so sorry for Naruto, he was so sad and guilty even though he had nothing to feel guilty about. Fugaku bastard. Sakura bitch. And I still can't believe that he is going to go through the surgry, but atleast Sasuke is being supportive. But I am still wondering how in the hell Sasuke's mom ended up with Fugaku, what the hell did she see in him. I hope she dumps him and then takes all or most of his money.

    I totally loved this chapter and I can't wait for the next chapter. I love this story.

    JJ
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  • From Madamdragon on December 08, 2011
    Oh please tell me he isn't really going to get surgery? That is out there. But still a good fic. I hope more is to come soon. Boobs really aren't a big deal mine are big and get in the way. Hate it. LOL
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  • From Bluerose92 on December 05, 2011
    oh my gob!
    i cant believe he did that?
    just cause of some picture
    that he could have easily said were photo shopped or some such thing.
    since she did get them enhanced she could have gotten them altered too.
    lol.
    the wedding was beautiful.
    and i almost cried.
    and then that *#$@ showed up.
    then i wanted to kill. (insert russian accent here)
    the limos and the kitchen scenes had to be my favorite tho.
    lmfao.
    im just a big perv.
    i cant wait for more.
    so update soon.
    and make sure you 'do away with' that *#$@ of an ex.
    hire a hitman.
    or something.
    just make it good.
    with lots of sex.

    ~Golden Kitsune~


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  • From BlueDragon8787 on December 05, 2011
    OH MY GOD! I can't believe what happened. It started out so nice and sweet but then that bitch had to ruin it. I hate her so much. And that bastard Fugaku, he needs to get his ass kicked making Naruto cry and feel guilty. I was so proud of Mikoto for standing up for Sasuke and Naruto. I hope she gots something up her sleeve to make him pay. Hell I hope you got something up your sleeve to make them all pay (Sakura and Fugaku).

    I totally love this story and I can't wait for the next chapter.

    JJ
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  • From Madamdragon on December 04, 2011
    Poor Sasuke and Naruto. I hope things go well for them after this. I will KILL Sakura. I'll sit on her if I gotta. That BITCH!!! Please update again soon.
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  • From ANON - Tweedleedee on December 04, 2011
    Oh the tension!
    Well, first off, you were right, sex WAS better than speeches.
    Second, Fugaku is a bastard (there probably is a bastard gene humans have not identified yet), and I hope Itachi has some kind of trick up his sleeve. i usually am a pessimist, but I want to believe in him, he can be so awesome as a loving brother (albeit a slightly sadictic one).
    And third, I hope to God Sakura will get what's coming to her in a painful, publicly humiliating or/AND (*wink,wink*) brobdingnagian way.

    I might be a bit forward, but I am sending you kisses and gold stars anyway... read you soon!
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