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Reviews for More Than Meets The Eye

By : Lanie12777
  • From ANON - Talltree-san on July 11, 2011
    So far I really like this story. I look forward to seeing where you take this story next!
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  • From ANON - G on July 11, 2011
    Never read the original version, but if you think it was too close to the movie it was based off of, then kudos to you for rewriting it to make it your own.

    I liked all of what I read so far, particularly the depiction of Naruto's marriage. I like that Naruto was totally aware of the affair, and that he's not the idiot that everyone seems to think he is. (How lame that Orochimaru was shocked about him knowing when he was so obvious about things. He really has no respect for Naruto at all!) It's good that Naruto is the sort of character who will stick to his guns about getting out of this marriage, that he's been beaten down by Orochimaru, but is still basically Naruto.

    The only thing I didn't like was the scene where Sakura wanted to check out the "sexy convict." It is hard to imagine that there would be lots of good looking inmates, as Sakura implied. (Somehow all the young dudes with good teeth who never did drugs just happened to be sent to Naruto's farm?) It is also really hard to imagine that Sakura would think it was a good idea to flirt with one of them--and especially not in the way she did by spilling water on him! (And Sakura feeling somewhat tempted to jump Sasuke?!) Since Sasuke is a convicted murder, that means Orochimaru's prison deals with serious offenders. You *don't* mess with these people. If the whole thing had happened more circumstantially, like they'd gone into the kitchen to get some water, were told it was OK to turn on the faucet, and then got a nice surprise out of it by accidentally soaking Sasuke, the scene wouldn't have bothered me at all.

    Other than that, good job on the chapter.
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  • From bloodshound on July 10, 2011
    I think i remember this story. I liked it. A lot. was this posted on another site or is this a re post?
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