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Reviews for More Than Meets The Eye

By : Lanie12777
  • From ANON - neekaa on July 22, 2012
    OMGGGGGGGGG !!! i love this story.. i will be lookin for updates ..this story is too good ! :) .. i never read a Naru/Oro .. but its really a Naru/Sas .. omggg i jus love this
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  • From CloudyJay on July 21, 2012
    This is really interesting so far. I really hope you finish this! Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - G on July 15, 2012
    Yay, new chapter! Things are heating up now that Naruto knows the truth (as far as Sasuke knows it, that is) and Itachi has arrived on-scene. I like everyone launching multiple investigations (Kakashi and Iruka, Itachi and his independent investigator, and now Sasuke, Naruto, and Gaara). I wonder who will figure it all out first? (Or probably what most likely, since the police have different resources than what Itachi has, or what Sasuke and Naruto know as the principles involved, they'll all figure out different pieces of the truth.)

    Since you brought up Gaara and Neji in your A/N at the end, I'll say that my feelings on side-pairings is that they aren't bad in and of themselves, but I usually find them to be a distraction from the main fic. (A lot of the time, the side-pairing stuff is so marginal to the main plot of the fic that if I completely skip over it, it doesn't affect my understanding of the fic at all.) Personally, the best part of the fic to me is all the intrigue, all the twists and turns with Naruto, Sasuke, and Orochimaru. If Gaara and Neji are directly contributing to that (the way Kakashi and Iruka do), I don't mind reading it, but if most of the time they're off doing their own thing, I'll probably end up skipping their stuff.
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  • From ANON - dream-weaver143 on July 15, 2012
    I remember reading this story years ago and liking it then. It's even better now! I love that Itachi's in it now as well! I look forward to reading more!
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  • From ANON - Talltree-san on July 15, 2012
    No I don't mind Neji and Gaara being together. I wonder what would happen when Neji finds out that Gaara's hiding a fugitive though. Also I wouldn't put it past Itachi to hire his own private investigator to find Sasuke either.
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  • From ANON - Lucy on May 17, 2012
    Very good! Especially the part of Orochimaru and Kabuto! Continue please, it's so exciting! *--*
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  • From bloodshound on May 09, 2012
    ah, damn, they're cute. they're not even trying to be and they're just unbearably cute. Well, at least naru knows some of the truth now.
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  • From ANON - Talltree-san on April 26, 2012
    Oooweee, their kisses could set something on fire XD! Much better than nasty Orochi XP!
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  • From lovel3ssangel on November 21, 2011
    Yes Yes YES! I love it! :D
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  • From ANON - Talltree-san on November 01, 2011
    Naruto finally knows the TRUTH about his soon to be EX-scumbag husband! But still I feel sorry for Naruto, he doesn't even know why Orochi want's him dead in the first place. Things like this goes to show what a problem like the sin GREED really is.
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  • From bloodshound on November 01, 2011
    damn, you up dated quite a bit... what i geet for not checking. Anyway, heh, damn, them sparks are flying. OOOOh, Itachi in the mix? cool. Well, one thing sure ain't changed from the original. the snake bastard is still a snake bastard. :P
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  • From Carousel on October 28, 2011
    I love this story so very much. It gets better with each chapter.
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  • From DenyingFatex on September 20, 2011
    So far, I really like this story a lot. Can't wait for more! :)
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  • From ANON - Talltree-san on August 27, 2011
    Man with all those holes in Sasuke's case it sounds like they have sent an innocent man to jail. Really sad when that happens whether in fanfics or in the real world. Just shows how corrupt the people higher up can be sometimes, though NOT ALL of them are like that.
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  • From ANON - G on August 26, 2011
    Naruto being annoying was funny. He's also started to figure out a way to get a few things he wants instead of being helpless or just being a victim. Good for him. Kakashi and Iruka are great investigators for already being suspicious of the situation. They can't prove anything just yet, but it's good they are on the right track. Sasuke's past sounds complicated. Not only does he have a missing older brother, but somehow he got himself involved with a double-crossing ex-wife. (Hope she's not any of the canon females--she sounds like a terrible person.) I'm looking forward to what will happen once Naruto finds out the truth about his (soon to be) ex-husband and Sasuke's past. :D
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