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Reviews for Sins of the Family

By : RyalsShoal
  • From ANON - lo on August 12, 2011
    Cool, I feel things are finally coming together. I really like this the mystery and sense of adventure is great in this, also, the relationship you are developing between the two is nice.
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  • From ANON - Althydia on August 11, 2011
    Great chapter - both for the romance and plot!
    I hope Iruka will be okay until Kakashi joins him... and the nin-dogs too!
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  • From ANON - Althydia on July 25, 2011
    But emotional development is good too! I consider that it's part of the plot anyway...
    Very nice chapter indeed! I loved to know more about Kakashi's conflicted feelings and how flustered Iruka makes him. But he's such a tease for Iruka in return! And Pakkun's frank insight was quite funny too. Now, will Iruka do something about that revelation...? Also, could the sexual tension hinder their progress? Then, shouldn't they do something about it soon? ;)
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  • From ANON - lo on July 24, 2011
    This story is progressing nicely.
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  • From ANON - Althydia on July 15, 2011
    Well, Iruka messed up this time, but they have actually progressed a lot! They now know that they are both sexually attracted to men, and the porn collection could definitely put Iruka in the mood... After Kakashi forgives Iruka's blunder and if they are not attacked because of it, of course.
    You portrayed them very well (definitely how I imagine them to be). I particularly like how Kakashi can go from very serious with killer instincts to goofily proud owner of the biggest porn collection in Konoha. And Iruka is always endearing, even with some of his flaws (like his famous temper). I was as surprised as Iruka by Kakashi's relationship with Asuma, though, but it was fun.
    Also, if nothing happens during this mission (with Kakashi), at least Iruka will know that he can try Konoha's higher ranking male shinobi for relationships... But I'd still love to see some action between the two, and more plot development too. :)
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  • From ANON - Ironfox on July 06, 2011
    *sits glues to computer screen waiting for more* O.O
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  • From ANON - Mystic on July 02, 2011
    I think I'm in love with this story! Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - lo on July 01, 2011
    This is great, I like how the story and relationship are developing. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Celtic Creature on July 01, 2011
    Kick butt story so far! Your plot development and characters are very well done. Cant wait for the next chappy :)
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  • From ANON - Fish on June 29, 2011
    Ahhhhh update please
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  • From ANON - Mystic on June 29, 2011
    I really like your story so far! I really hope you continue to update, cause there are some out there who hardly ever update. Again, I really like it ^_^ Your whole storyline is extremely interesting, and I think you've gotten Iruka's and Kakashi's characters down really well. All in all, this story is really great so far, and I can't wait to see how it turns out!
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  • From ANON - lo on June 26, 2011
    I like how this story and the relationship between the two are developing and I really like how they interact with each other. I can't wait to read more!
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  • From yummygummybear222 on June 26, 2011
    I loved it! I hope you update soon! Your fic is seriously interesting, I can"t wait to find out about the Hashibara ghost story, if Iruka has anything to do with it and if so what, what the name Hashibara has to do with Iruka, who is after Iruka and why, and most importantly (because I am a crazy fangirl) if Kakashi and Iruka get togther (I hope so)!
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  • From ANON - Althydia on June 24, 2011
    Poor Iruka! People trying to kill him, a cursed clan, loneliness, and now a slimy cave full of slugs as a home... Plus, his only human companion does not seem really sympathetic to his plight. Kakashi can be so evil sometimes... Although Naruto certainly would have given a lot to be able to see his face like Iruka did. And doesn't it look like there are the beginnings of attraction between the two shinobi? Nice! :)

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  • From Carousel on June 24, 2011
    Chapter 4 was really excellent. Your writing is so detailed and I find myself being drawn further and further into the story. I can't wait for the next chapter, so please update soon. :]
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