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By : MisatosPenPen
  • From ANON - Lily on November 12, 2016

    Seriously, I would love to see Sasuke throughly violate Sakura as well.


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  • From ANON - Lily on November 12, 2016

    Eh, I am reading this and I am one of those perverts that do enjoy het as much as yaoi and yuri, I would love to see Sasuke get at Sakura as well, maybe make Sakura and Kakashi perform in front o fhim.


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  • From ANON - on November 12, 2016

    This tugged my heart strings and hit so many kink buttons at the same time.


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  • From ANON - Sassynu on September 26, 2014
    Oh my sweetness, just when you didn't see that loving moment coming there it was! I thought aw man another unfinished story but happy day it was updated. I agree you can't rush the goods and boy was it from beginning to end I loved it. I really liked Naruto's deep thinking about his reason for wanting to save Sasuke, I'm a huge cat person so the little stray is a nice touch. I can't wait to see where this story goes now, and with so much more of the manga exposed I wonder if any of that will be incorporated.
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  • From ANON - sassynu on July 24, 2013
    Wow, this story is amazing. At first I wasn't sure I'd be in for the Kakashi torture but I read on and on and it was so good and kept getting better, your writing style is incredible how it paints the picture and gives the reader some pretty good visual, ans when Sasuke was telling his Orochimaru rape story pure genius, so well written I loved it! I don't know how it's gonna end but I'm very intrigued, the slow build up of emotions on kakashi's part was great too. Can't wait for more this story is a very refreshing change from what I'm used to reading it's dark and deep and all kinds of good stuff that leaves the reader thinking about it later.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 30, 2013
    Best Yaoi story I've read. Characterizations are beautiful. Very well-written. A couple typos, nothing that detracts from the story. Can't wait to read more~
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  • From Lady9 on October 08, 2012
    I was extemely excited to see another chapter. I'm so glad you listened to my review. It worked great and I am anticipating what the project is. I don't know if I'm more curious about the project or of naruto seeing sasuke again. I don't see how the next chapter could be dull at all with how much tension has been built up. Since reading your story I have updated myself on all of the anime of naruto and some of the later manga. I don't mind the different twist you story took because you didn't know about author's intentions. It just adds to the creativity of your fanfiction. You are a fantastic writer and I hope my degree will be a bit more than a piece of paper that costed thousands of dollars. LOL
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  • From daughterofvirgo on September 10, 2012
    Chapter 12. It's nice to see Sasuke with a conscience.

    Update soon, okay.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on September 05, 2012
    Glad to see you updated!! Incredible to see the change in Sasuke. Can't wait to see what his project is!

    Keep going! Great chapter :)
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  • From KatzeRaoul on September 04, 2012
    Naruto is an asshole and Sakura is a bitch, that's all I have to say about them. Now on to Sasuke, I can't believe I'm saying this but you better live. You better not let those assholes kill you and Kashi!
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  • From Lady9 on June 23, 2012
    I first started reading your story yesterday. I just finished chapter 11 and want more! Focusing as a critic, since I am a creative writing major :P, your character development thoughout these chapters has been flawless. I have truly felt the characters grow and change in a unique, but not overly done, way. The story has a major dark stream to it, yet it is completely tasteful. The suspence has been consistent which is why it took me only two days to read (would have been one but work interfered).

    I would like to see more about the outside characters by this point because Kakashi and Sasuke's relationship seems well defined. Unless of course you mean to reveal Sasuke's "hobby" in the next chapter in which case I doubt readers will get bored at all. The writing itself is clear and easily understood, even for someone like me who has only seen some Naruto and not all of it. This is a great story and I love the yaoi but appiciate even more the creative and fasinating story line included in the sex. Some people will never understand that sex is nothing without a good story pushing it along. Wonderful job and I look forward to reading more!
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  • From crimsondesirex3 on May 17, 2012
    *SQUEAL* I COMMAND THEE TO WRITE MORE!!! *POINTS A GIANT FINGER AT.* I wanna know what happens next. :3:3 I absolutely LOVE how dark and twisted Sasuke is in this story. *RESISTS FANGIRL SQUEAL*
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  • From crimsondesirex3 on April 24, 2012
    I love how possessive and dark/evil sasuke is in this story. don't see that too often.good read
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  • From ANON - Ikke on March 25, 2012
    Oh my, the whole oro-thing was creepy, creepy 'good' but creepy, very nicely written and the whole angry Sasuke, so cute and completely understandable (I had wondered about some of those things myself as well), I haven't completely forgiven Kakashi for his shift in the original yet either. Also we got some answers to 'wonders' in the story too, you make me a very happy fan. I don't mind that the fic is getting longer than expected btw, keep your art coming, it inspires my dreams (quite literally sometimes, fingers crossed it won't be oro).
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  • From ANON - cynaga on March 24, 2012
    ch. 10 Oh, Sasuke-kun!
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