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Reviews for When A Heart Cracks

By : SirGeneralSir
  • From MyGrandioseEgo on April 15, 2011
    The story is truly captivating and you must continue it. But you also must pay attention to writing errors and misspellings. The idea of story is original and you clearly have the “thing” in you that is required to become a writer, even if is an amateur. Follow your intuition, keep your schedule (if it is possible) and write. I will look for your story because I do like it.
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  • From Tricia1224 on April 10, 2011
    This is a very interesting story. I look forward to seeing what this story becomes. There are a few spelling things here and there. Compashionate should be compassionate, thou should be though, and there is one more, but I can't remember where it was. Have a great day.
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  • From lordamnesia on April 07, 2011
    Not bad at all, a little trusting of the new ninja, but it's good. Your obviously referencing the danger or someone with Yokai fathering a child, the child having yokai and possibly killing the mother because of this. Haven't really seen that before, so it's an interesting concept. Keep up the great work!
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  • From Cerridwen on March 05, 2011
    This was a pretty good story and I can't wait to see what you'll come up with next. The action was very good and the dialog wasn't too bad either.
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