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Reviews for I Want to be Selfish

By : Yumichan
  • From kagomegirl on August 06, 2011
    you seriously need a major overhaul on your fic. love the idea but hate the way its been written out. especially with the stupid style/font etc... stuff that is all over the fic with huge spaces between paragraphs, summary like writing and more. get a GOOD beta reader to help you out. its a great idea you just need a good rewrite.
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  • From HeartStar on July 29, 2010
    oh I love this I hope to see more soon!
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  • From JtheChosen1 on July 15, 2010
    Excellent work! You have great plot and character development, keep up the great job!
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  • From Jesse2Hot011290 on July 12, 2010
    I realy love the way you captured the characters and the way you use the manga and animated show for your story. I also love the fact you made naruto and sasuke character more realistic and the way that they should be. I would like to get an update on the next chapters for this story.
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  • From serenagold on July 09, 2010
    Keep up the great work!
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  • From JtheChosen1 on July 06, 2010
    For the record, I was CRYING at the touchy scene! So good! Keep up the great work, that cliffhanger was intense!
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  • From JtheChosen1 on June 29, 2010
    Excellent story here, I cannot wait for more soon!
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