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Reviews for Homeless Harlot

By : Resting-Madness
  • From Prism0467 on April 22, 2010
    Shikamaru and Neji, sticking up for Naruto against Sasuke.

    HELL YEAH BITCHES!
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  • From Carousel on April 12, 2010
    I feel awful for Naruto, but Sasuke and Kakashi are ridiculously hot.
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  • From arabuzumaki on April 11, 2010
    Oh jeez, it's better that naru found out before Gai. Shika was right as usual, I wonder how he'll hurt Sasuke lol
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  • From Prism0467 on April 11, 2010
    HA! BUSTED!

    Finally.
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  • From UllaBritta on April 05, 2010
    I usually don't read KakaGai or KakaSasu but I read this anyway since it promised to be smutty. I wasn't disapointed >:)
    And so here is what I think;
    First, Sasuke is such a dirty slut OMG!! But he seems so.. perfect. I mean, here he was on the streets for so long and after a couple of months he has straight A's in school, friends, very sexualy active etc etc His past doesn't seem to trouble him that mouch I mean. I'm thinking that something like that would shape him a bit more. I can't imagine someone that was homeless for so long to bounce back so quickly and become a total seducer.
    What I'm saying is, he isn't angsty enough..??? But then again that should be a relief. Finaly a fic that isn't all about his demons LoL
    But that's just my opinion, my brain ghosts. At the same time I also think, maybe that's why he is so clingy to Kakashi. Because the man "confessed" to him now he is set on keeping him. Since he was lonely...? Another brain ghost of mine.
    Second, Poor Gai. His man is being seduced by a male Lolita that gives me bad vibes. I had this vision of Sasuke getting rid of Gai.. with the use of something blunt and heavy and burying the body. (I hope that's not your plan, that would be so evil!)And he is so nice to the Mistress too. :(
    And poor Naruto, he's so clueless and wants to help Sasuke. Be a good boyfriend.
    Third, Gai cracks me up with the Soap Opera thing XD. He's like a gossiping housewife haha.
    Fourth, Good sex *thumbs up à la Gai* :D
    Anyway, I'm looking forwards to the next chapter, keep writing^^
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  • From ANON - Carousel on April 04, 2010
    I really love this story; it's magnificent. I'm so curious to see what will happen next. Update soon!
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  • From missbri88 on April 03, 2010
    oooooh! I feel bad for Gai! But I must ay your writing is the shiznits! Lol. I love it and I've been spazzing out during these last few chapters. The sheet of dieting paper line was too awesome! I had to tell my mom and she loved it too. I can't wait for more
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  • From Prism0467 on April 02, 2010
    We always hurt the ones we love.
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  • From Prism0467 on March 21, 2010
    This fic is taking on undertones of that Silverstone vehicle The Crush.

    Please don't let anything bad happen to Maitou Gai.
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on March 14, 2010
    Excellent job! One critique though: 'smoke filled the bathing area of the locker room in a thick haze.' - the word smoke should be replaced by steam. Thank you for this wonderful update!

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  • From yaoiismyantidrug on March 13, 2010
    Oh man..... the interrupted shower scene was so delicious. I'm kind of torn as to whether I would have rather had it play out, or if it's better *because* it was interrupted XD Love Sasuke's cool demeanor afterwards ^^

    Ahhh, fighting with conscience, guilt and temptation, so irresistible. I look forward to the next chapter :)
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  • From Carousel on March 11, 2010
    ILOVEIT.The toy scene was so unexpected and so fantastic. More please.
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  • From arabuzumaki on March 11, 2010
    I'm so loving this story. But for a strange reason I'm taking it to heart :s I don't know what it is about it that makes me so upset.
    I still look forward to more >.
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  • From Prism0467 on March 11, 2010
    I think your chapter title is very creative.
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  • From ANON - anonanon on March 01, 2010
    *stares* Wow, thank you for updating once more, I'm glad to see them finally make out, and in a steamy shower scene no less! Please update once more when you have the time. Also, if you want to read a good KakashixSasuke oneshot wip story, look for Jingle Bells(not a Christmas story). The Lemon in there is so hot.....just read it if you haven't already.
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