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Reviews for Homeless Harlot

By : Resting-Madness
  • From ViperValentine on July 14, 2012
    you dont understand. i stayed awake for 33 hours to read this! it was amazing!!! i mean fucking amazing! the personality of the characters the love behind it all! it was so greatly put together! i cried when it was ove! i want to read more. i would LOVE to read more! to bad its over ;A;
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  • From ANON - Marcella on May 22, 2012
    Yeah... I am having troubles with continuing reading this story. There is no thing as cuckoldry I love more... but... thisis just wrong. I even feel quilty going thru your story! :D Half of chapter 12 adn to be honest... ... you did that story so real-like and Gai so lovely person I just cant enjoy it anymore. tHERE ISNT nothing better than Kakashi fucking Sasuke senselessly but this is just wrong...and whats worse I am starting getting hate Sasuke...buhu:'(
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  • From ANON - Marcella on May 22, 2012
    Yeah... I am having troubles with continuing reading this story. There is no thing as cuckoldry I love more... but... thisis just wrong. I even feel quilty going thru your story! :D Half of chapter 12 adn to be honest... ... you did that story so real-like and Gai so lovely person I just cant enjoy it anymore. tHERE ISNT nothing better than Kakashi fucking Sasuke senselessly but this is just wrong...and whats worse I am starting getting hate Sasuke...buhu:'(
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  • From ANON - Marcella on May 17, 2012
    Hey, I'm right in the middle of chapter 11 and firs I really didnt know what was going on with Lee, but then I suddenly realize what your devil plans are like. Dont you dare...!! I love Sasuke as a poor little homeless, not an insidious bastard! *frowning furiously*...:D
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  • From ANON - Marcella on May 16, 2012
    Oh gee, there's no passion in their sex at all. Man that just sucks:/
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  • From ANON - Marcella on May 14, 2012
    Oh god, first kiss! Always the best part of the whole story! Whatmore first rejected kiss, I could clearly imagine that cold look on Kakashi's uncovered face. Vrrr...Purr more likely :D Glad that you didnit screw it:P Pbbbt
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  • From ANON - Marcella on May 08, 2012
    Well its 2AM and i'm at the beggining of chapter 8. Finally some action and to be honest, i just love it! Even though that Sasuke's character is little bit different since first chapter and I'd do everything to read Orochimaru fuck the brain out of Sasuke, but Naruto's fine and its more tru-like..ehm "tru-like" and cute this way:)
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  • From ANON - Marcella on May 08, 2012
    Hey, whats that? I'm getting little bit cheesy now. Gai already know yet they even had proper fuck. What the heck? Where's all that mystery gone?! For gods sake, dont do this to me...
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  • From ANON - Marcella on May 08, 2012
    As I said before, i feel little bit uneasy about Gai but right now i could not imagin anyone else better fitting in this role! Go my baby!:P Luv it... still impatiently waiting for all that hidden darkness
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  • From ANON - Marcella on May 07, 2012
    Well i got thru first chapter i could say, it sure looks interesting! Firstly i was slighty taken aback about pairing Kakashi/Gai but the tru is, even imagination of them being together is hilarious and you did brilliant job there :D I couldnt stop myself from small silly smiles now and then and honestly I'd never thought that simple buying cocoa could be so funny. Your story is sweet and everithing but! I can feel that small unoticable hint of danger and violence in itself which's keeping me really keen to another chapter! :) hope for your best so lets see...
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  • From ANON - oztan on November 13, 2010
    Read the whole thing. GREAT loved it.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 12, 2010
    booooooooo I wanted a Kaka/Sasu ending -pout-

    fuck Gai, Kakashi should have left him for Sasuke!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Carousel on June 12, 2010
    Such a beautiful story! I'm so glad the ending was happy. You sure know how to make a girl cry. =] Bravo!
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  • From nivell on June 12, 2010
    Well, no one died so I'm happy about the ending! Yay!
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  • From Prism0467 on June 11, 2010
    Excellent storytelling.
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