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Reviews for Naruto: Harem Shadow

By : DFoarile
  • From ANON - Anon on September 13, 2009
    would it be possible for Eureka from Eureka Seven after she has grown her wings and after the transformation she keeps her wings? if you have never seen the series here is a link to a picture that shows what she looks like in the state that I am talking about: http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r218/animevgirl/Eurekawings.jpg if that didnt show up its http:// i145.photobucket[dot]com/albums/r218/animevgirl/Eurekawings[dot]jpg
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  • From VFSNAKE on September 13, 2009
    THAT WAS AWESOME! Will you get Hana or maybe Anko? What about Seras from Helling? Those large breasts and that skirt that just says "look at my fine legs and stare at my firm ass!". Put her in!
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  • From evermalace on September 13, 2009
    Fairly decent story but in all fairness it need some massive editing... I just can't get past some of the sentence structure and poor use of words, as well as just the basic grammatical errors. good concept though it just needs some serious re-editing before you continue posting more chapters.
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  • From SagashiIndustries on September 12, 2009
    Heh, I'd personally like to see some Sailor Senshi or Ranma1/2 girls show up. This is looking pretty good so far.
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  • From on September 12, 2009
    A good story up until the point where you had Sakura dump all her memories of Sasuke. Fact is that Sasuke is doing the right thing by being EXTREMELY pissed at the village and wanting to destroy them. If I was him and Konoha had done the same thing to me.... GOODBYE VILLAGE, BURNING IN FLAMES!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 12, 2009
    This is a very sexy chapter. I love how you added Orihime and Yoruichi they are two of my favorite female characters in bleach. This story is so good, please continue it.
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  • From VFSNAKE on September 12, 2009
    SWEET! Narto got it on with his sexy slaves. Get Sera "Kitty" Victoria frm Hellsing. That would be awesome! Don't forget Temari, Ino, Ayame, and Shizune in order to keep Tsunade in the dark. Also, use it on Tsunade so she can finally be a Mom, and use Kyuubi's chakra to make her young again.
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  • From inuyasha18090 on September 11, 2009
    I think that this is an amzing story and i hope you make more like this plz
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 11, 2009
    This is really good. Thank you for taking my suggestion, I love kaa power of hypnosis and how he coils around the victims body. I love snakes because of the jungle book. I know that a bit disturbing but hey to each his own. The spelling and grammar were good except in a few spots. Like how Hinata said pleading instead of pleasuring. However overall it very good. I how Anko next I love to see her wrap up in bondage wether with ropes or snakes. Good luck!
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  • From VFSNAKE on September 10, 2009
    YEAH! That was hot! Naruto getting it on with his slaves and now Sakura joins. Sweet! KEEP IT UP! Get Ino next.
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  • From theimpacientone on September 10, 2009
    this is great! think you can include Samui?
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 10, 2009
    This story is so good. Naruto going to have sex slaves! This first chapter has already caught my interest and I know it going to be a exciting and lust fill story. I hope you try to incorporate snake hypnosis like in the jungle book with kaa. I so looking forward to your next chapter.
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  • From nm1716 on September 10, 2009
    I like the story and can't wait to see what happens next. I am glad that Naruto will not be an I rule the would type. I thank each of his girls should stay party true to who they are just more submissive. I can't wait to next time. PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON!!!
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  • From VFSNAKE on September 10, 2009
    Nice! Naruto is getting sex slaves and Hinata is the Queen. SWEET! Can't wait to see who he nabs next.
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