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Reviews for Stricken

By : JazzyBell
  • From ANON - puppydog on June 15, 2009
    This is pretty good so far! What happened to Kakashi? Who else is going to get it? Will there be a cure? Please answer my questions by writing more! Please!
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  • From ANON - rianestorm on May 28, 2009
    I really like this story. I hope you write more soon.
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  • From Ladylara on May 24, 2009
    Wow, I am liking this story already. I hope you add more chapters. It is interesting to see how this will unfold. Nice work.
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  • From Kdragonfire on May 18, 2009
    I hope Neji rescues Tenten from Gai and Lee. Only to want her for himself I can see her fleeing only to have Neji coming after like Pepe la Pue style and shes that scared cat. How about after Saruka giving Kakashi his medicine she goes home and finds Naruto screwing her mother. I can see her mother giving Naruto the key and saying don't be a stranger come any time morning, noon or night.Then telling her daugther that she in love then trying to find out all of Naruto's favorite meals from Saruka. I think Sakura would flip out or would she be jealous? This is an interesting story with a lot of potential.Hope you update soon.
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  • From Mizzroja on April 30, 2009
    Nice one!!!! I want more!!!!
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  • From SecretQuill on April 14, 2009
    hot chapter XD, though i really hope that asuma won't be unfaithful and go to a student instead of kurenai... they make such a cute couple. and i wonder who tenten will end up with ;D
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  • From ANON - jupmod on April 13, 2009
    Interesting idea. Just I wondering if you're going to pair the girls up only with their perspective teammates. Other words... Tenten with Neji, Lee, Gai. Sakura with Kakashi, Naruto, Sai (or Sasuke if this is before the timeskip). Hinata and Kurenai with Shino and Kiba. Ino with Shikamaru and Chouji. It would be even more interesting if the girls get it on with guys outside their teams. Like Tenten ends up with Naruto, Hinata with Lee, etc. Tsunade did say to help their teammates, so if any of the guys ask for it, the ladies have to do it with them. ;)
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  • From ANON - Tricia1224 not logged on on April 11, 2009
    So far this is really good. Very interesting. Gai and Lee LOL that would be a lesson in stamina or maybe just not have a libido. LOL Kurenai doesn't have to worry unless Asuma is out on a mission. What about pregnancy? Poor Sakura got 4 on her team or is Sasuke back in Konaha? Talk about escort mission issues. Will this affect the academy students or just the shinobi who have reaced puberty? I know lots of questions on my part. At least Jiraiya is taken care of. Wait this sounds like something he might just write about . LOL ok I am done here. I am enjoying this so far. The crackiness and hotness is so aaahhhhaaaahhhhhaaa!!!!! ;)
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  • From Prism0467 on April 11, 2009
    Hooray for moral dilemma!

    Will there be some naughty Kurenai/Kiba action in this one? Please?
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  • From Overlordofnobodies on April 11, 2009
    The lemon was good but I like the part with Tenten more. Man I fill so sorry for her right now. I hope ever things works out for Kurenai to.
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  • From ANON - Panther Eyes on April 11, 2009
    wow! surely hinata will be seeing to kiba n shino's needs? ok gai i can understand making a person sick to their stomach but lee! lee is so adorable n he alaways aim to please n with his speed a girl can find satisfaction(sp?) especially since he will never rest until he does it right. so yea... i would do lee.
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  • From SecretQuill on April 07, 2009
    oh please continue on this one! it's got so much potential!
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  • From ANON - Panther Eyes on April 05, 2009
    i can only imagine how everything well turn up after the "sickness" is over. after kakashi who will sakura sleep with next? naruto? sasuke? sai? cuz i dont think she can take them all at once. hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - Yuki on April 04, 2009
    I hope this is not a oneshot- I really want to see what happens next! It's a great start for a plot and I want to see more of it. Pretty please? =D
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  • From ANON - Lady Dokuga on April 04, 2009
    You seem to be off to an excellent start so far. I must admit, I do love the plot device of this plague upon all male ninja, and it should make for some excellent options for lemons
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