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Reviews for Excoriate

By : blackcatback
  • From mabidiso on November 20, 2012
    This is one of my favorite KakaSasu stories, and it certainly inspired me to search for more. There are surprisingly enough not so many. Sigh. Sure do wish this particular story had been continued. It's well written and the exploration of Sasuke's and Kakashi's thoughts, feelings and conflicts thereof are top notch.
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  • From ANON - visavis on October 29, 2011
    Incredible story, so well written. I think it will be stuck somewhere in my brain for a long, long time to come. Sasuke's emotions were so immediate, and I couldn't help myself but hold my breath in suspense as he tried to get away with taking so many liberties with Kakashi. The thing that cements this delicious story inside my head, though, is Kakashi's thoughts and indecision and weight of responsibility and trust versus propriety and another issue of trust. Wow.
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  • From Nimbafuu on September 07, 2011
    I'm loving this! I can't wait to see if you update!
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  • From ANON - PikaCheeka on May 01, 2010
    Loved this. Very good portrayal of the KakaSasu relationship and one of the best fics out there of them IMO. You handled it well and the result was very realistic and IC. Sasuke's pride and boldness combined with Kakashi's avoidance and uncertainty were perfectly aligned here. Good job! =D I love the way you write them.



    How ironic that the code-words I had to type in for this review were "certainly arousing"
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  • From ANON - iixne on January 01, 2010
    I liked it! No, I loved it! = D. There's sumin incredibly hot about Sasuke molesting his sensei in his sleep o_o, lol xD. I like how you portrayed the two of them, I always find it odd in other fanfics where kakashi suddenly just decides to rape one his students and fuck them senseless, cause I dunno, Kakashi doesn't strike me as that kind of person, he seems like the kind of guy who would be like "this is wrong" and try to fight with himself about it first and maybe after time give in. But you kept everyone pretty much in character! So i must say it was very awesome! I like the little game the two of them were playing what with Sasuke trying to see kakashi's face, lol, I hope Sasuke wins it at sum point xD- I think if he did Kakashi would be proud and shocked at the same time xD. But he's learning great stealth skills from all this! So at least it's paying off in some way = D. You're very good at writing, the way you describe things I could easily picture it in my head as it played out. I usually don't like Sasuke/Kakashi but I must say this was very well done and anything that's well done deserves to be acknowledged. I like where your going with this and the look into Sasuke's thoughts makes it all the more interesting. Don't know how long ago you updated or if you'll ever update again, but if you do I'd love to read it.

    Great story, awesome job, keep up the great work = D
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  • From ANON - anna on April 17, 2009
    Hm, that was bold of Sasuke. I do think of Sasuke as a posessive type of character.

    I want to know what's going on in Kakashi's part soon.


    You play the story slow but sure. I like that you don't rush them in going at each other at once. The apprehension and emotions that play between them is convincing - especially on Kakashi's part.

    It's nice that there's actually plot in this story. And it's real.
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  • From ANON - anna on April 17, 2009
    Very interesting first chapter. I'd love to see what happens next.


    Wow. No sex in the first chapter? I LIKE.At least there's actual development unlike the rest.
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  • From ShinobiGoneWild on April 16, 2009
    Firstly thank youuuuuuuuu for moving this to the Kaka/Sasu section because I know otherwise I'd be ripping my hair out trying to dig for it. This is so...INTERESTING to me--well I'd be able to come up with a better word if my brain wasn't a big ol' pile of useless right now. Sasuke's boldness just increases every chapter and boy am I encouraging it. I do feel slightly bad for Kakashi since he's kind of trapped in the corner between not pushing Sasuke away while still not condoning his actions, which is difficult. Sasuke's descriptive fantasies of groping Kakashi are so perfect and have me practically BEGGING for them to happen. And then...oh lawd...Kakashi got HARD! I knew it would happen and I knew he would be ashamed and feel guilty yet also try to defend himself XD

    I love love love this story! ♥
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  • From subtextual on April 15, 2009
    Ah, this is such a cute story -- I definitely like where you're going with it so far. Their ritual, Kakashi's ... well, more or less uncertain acquiescence to Sasuke's desire for him, Sasuke's fascination with Kakashi's scars, his humanity -- I love what you're doing with it. As well as the fact that you're setting this around the Chuunin exams. (I predict that this will progress into the monthlong Chidori and taijutsu training, right? :D)

    I've never been able to write shouta though I do like reading it. I'm more of a post-canon/post-timeskip KakaSasu fan/writer but I do enjoy writers who handle the shouta well. I look forward to seeing how you'll have Kakashi deal with Sasuke, and his own reactions -to- Sasuke. ^_^
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  • From ANON - ~~~ on April 14, 2009
    I think this is really good so far. I like the switch in roles - usually it's Kakashi who is portrayed as being the pervy aggressor, and I like that Sasuke's the one doing the molesting, for once ;) I'm curious to see how much of the Chuunin Exams you write. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Jam on April 14, 2009
    I love this so far. The tension and pace are working just right for me, and I think you nailed the characters.

    Can't wait to read the rest!
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  • From Gwenn on April 14, 2009
    Loved it ! I like the fact that Kakashi doesn't konw how to react, it makes him human. I love the way you describe Sasuke's emotions, it really is very intense and it's nice to read.
    Good job !
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  • From ANON - t-chan on March 07, 2009
    I really like this story, especially Sasuke's characterization. I like how sneaky he is, and yet how he's also inexperience and innocent in a way. Very, very good. I hope you continue this, because I'm looking forward to reading it.
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  • From ShinobiGoneWild on March 04, 2009
    Ohhh I'm so happy my buddy pointed me in your direction! You should post this in the Kaka/Sasu section ^^

    But anyways onto what you've written. The characterization and pacing is perfect for my tastes (and likely everyone else's) you describe Sasuke's struggle with his feelings perfectly while also keeping him in mind his stubborness for things to happen his way. I'm in love with your Kakashi because he tries so hard to be responsible while also doing his best not to push Sasuke away...even though he knows he should ^_^ Then the details of the minor things really help me visualize the atmosphere. When Sasuke was touching Kakashi's scar and describing the empty space of his eyelashes and the texture...ah! I love it!

    Sorry if my review is inconsistent or choppy...I was on the phone writing it haha ♥
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  • From Gwenn on March 02, 2009
    I'm glad you updated, I really love this story ^^
    I love how you describe all of Sasuke's actions, what he thinks,... It really is well written.

    I look forward to reading more !!
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