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Reviews for Coming Up F'in Roses

By : Shaylilin
  • From oliversangel on October 17, 2008
    Shit that was hot. *fans self rapidly with magazine* Man. It would have been better, had my children not been bothering me through half of it. Why is it that kids can always sense the moment when you really don't want to be bothered, then they pester the fuck out of you. Poor Naruto's heiny. LOL. It's really nice seeing Itachi all sweet and loving and caring. I was reading your other review repsonses, and saw that you were worried about Nar's birthday chapter being filler. I mean if you consider that filler.....Great chapter, spectacular first time. It was well worth the wait. If my House one, and my other one turns out to be half as hot, I'll be a happy girl!! XXOO
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  • From ANON - Paul on October 12, 2008
    I have got to say im a kibanaru fan hardcore but I love your story to death, Your very good at writing the emotion they feel for the moment. But Good job i loved it
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  • From tawanawelch on October 11, 2008
    Awww, I cried when Kakashi said Iruka bought the gifts with the stipend from the gov't. All those wonderful heartfelt gifts Iruka wished for, for Naruto was just amazing. That was such a touching family moment. I thought it would be a car too right until the very end. Then, when Naruto thought about sharing the news with Itachi then thought about a helmet. I almost cried again when Iruka made the purchase in the right color and the Uchiha crest on it as well. This was a great chapter!!!!!!! So, Haku's in on it too, with Madara? He's got the whole hospital wing wrapped around his proverbial penis, so to speak. LOL.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on October 11, 2008
    That was an awesome way to makeup the birthdays for Naruto. I love the Harley with the orange-swirled helmet.
    I'm glad that Sasuke is doing better.
    I guess Dr. Haku isn't as young and innocent as he appears to be ^^
    Great chapter!
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  • From ItaNarulover on October 11, 2008
    Aww...so cute and fluffy! I loved it!
    Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
    Take care. Hugs
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  • From oliversangel on October 11, 2008
    *jumps up and down excitedly* OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!! That was the sweetest freaking thing ever!!! I love that Iruka got him all those really sweet gifts, and the motorcycle. *sigh* I want a Chopper. LOL. I loved this chapter. It was very sweet. Shit Madara is seriously depraved. It's kinda hard for me to like him. ^.^ Man, I am getting impatient with Naruto and Itachi. I honestly was yelling in my head, "Stick it in already Itachi!! Damn!!" LOL. I know, good things come to those who wait. ^.^ XXOO
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  • From oliversangel on October 07, 2008
    Poor sick Sasuke. I agree with another reveiwer, the sick talk was adorable. I am terrified of pnemonia. Because my lungs have collapsed, the docs told me I have a high risk of getting pnemonia, and a simple cold can even progress into it. Everytime I get the sniffles, I'm on edge. Nasty, Sakura. Slut. LOL. The hospital room sounds awesome, I wish they rooms like that. Hospital beds are horrible to sleep on, and I can totally sympathize with you on sitting in the ER for ages. The ER is almost my second home in between my own klutziness, and having two small children just as klutzy as me. LOL. Wow, that was definately hot in the alley there. Naruto must have been super horny. LOL. I can't wait to read more, and so you know, the next chapter is about one third written. ^.^
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  • From tawanawelch on October 07, 2008
    Awww, poor Sasuke's got pneumonia. He's adorable with the sick talk, I like that.:) Naruto getting a little hot and bothered that he went to an ally with Itachi. My, my he is really ready to take things a step further.:) Was Itachi trying to avoid Iruka scolding him the other night? I love that you have Haku in this, he's cute. Will there be others in this as well?
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  • From ItaNarulover on October 06, 2008
    Thank you so much! I guess you can tell from my name what I think of this fic ;P but I'll tell you anyway.
    I love it! So fucking amazing, it's so incredibly well written, and it's SO CUTE!!! Kawaii! *squeals*
    And what makes it so awesome as well, is that it really focuses on the love between Itachi and Naruto, and I really love that. They're not just fucking each other against the nearest surface everytime they see each other, which I don't mind actually, BUT i prefer when it's like this. And let me tell you I haven't read any fic that has this much ItaNaru-love-fluff, EVER!! It's true, and I spend a lot of my freetime/time when I really should be doing other stuff here everyday at AFF reading fics, so to me you're one hell of a writer.
    And I like that you can make Itachi sugery-sweet while still keeping him in character. The same with Sasuke. ;P
    Sorry if this is boring you...*blushes*
    But I just wanted to thank you for writing this cause I'm enjoying every minute of it.
    So keep up with the good work, and good luck with the writing.
    Take care. Hugs
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  • From ANON - qwerty on October 03, 2008
    I like this story. It's very sweet!
    update!

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  • From tawanawelch on October 03, 2008
    This story is good also. I like Ita/Naru together I've only read and liked one other story with this pairing. Madara was hard pressed to get them into smoking, man. Now Naruto and Sasuke came away with some problems after visiting with Uncle Madara. Can't wait for the next chapter.XD
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  • From oliversangel on October 03, 2008
    Of course you're crazy doll, all mothers with 2 or more kids are crazy. ^.^ I love that Iruka is Nar's adoptive father. I also love the idea of a Narutachi pairing, I don't think I've seen it before. They are beyond adorable together. Poor Itachi's blue balls. Seems like Naruto is almost ready to give it up though eh? I can imagine Naruto's first virginal blow job. I bet he's gonna be adorable on the giving and recieving ends. I can picture him peeking up at 'Tachi from under his lashes, and asking, is this ok? teehee, so cute. Man, Madara is a hedonistic bastard huh? I can't believe he let them continue, and was able to finish with his nephews and Nar in the room. And just because I would die of curiosity, were the girls that were blowing him Sakura and Ino? That's my guess anyways. Well, I can't wait to read more!!! XXOO
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  • From OrochiGreel on October 02, 2008
    Nice. Continue.
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