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From UzumakiTheDobe on October 04, 2008
Omg! I can't belive i first missed that 2 new chapters were out! .. But then, my computer has been evil the last days, so internet would work as it should have. lol.

Anyway! You made me cry this time! I just felt soooo sorry for Zetsu! And of course, Naruto! I even hold my own stomach, like i was the one that was kidnapped and pregnant XD haha.

- Na-chan
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From TheSimi on October 04, 2008
Aww this chapter made me feel sorry for Zetsu! No matter how amusing him arguing with himself his, he is fighting some serious demons of his own. I hope that they�ll be able to separate his personalities from each other so that he�ll be free.

I�m very glad that Obito didn�t punish Dei too severely, it�s like Obito said the one who�s beating him up worst about this is probably Dei himself. I think that he�s REALLY gonna do everything in his power to find Naruto now.

I understand about Sasuke and the numbness. Sometimes when something horrible happens to you, you have to keep yourself numb in order to function. If you fall apart you won�t be able to do anything�

I�m so happy that Naruto is free and back with Sasuke where he belongs, I feel kind of bad for him that he had to perform a concert straight away after his ordeal though. But then again Naruto could probably have done anything then when he knew he would get to go home with Sasuke.

Thank you so much for this chapter and as usual I can�t wait to read more!

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From oliversangel on October 02, 2008
Well, that was an interesting way to deal with MPREG. LOL. It makes sense I suppose, if we can get past the impossibility of it all. I just tolerate it, because the men should have to suffer through it like we do. They honestly have no idea. I just wish they could feel one contraction, one day of morning sickness.....then they would bow to us!!! LOL. I'm glad you knocked Naruto up, you're right, a hormonal Sasuke would have been unbearable. I too was a complete BITCH while PG. I'm glad you brought in Naruto's dad, and I saw him getting kidnapped a mile away. Not b/c you are predictable or anything, but I have just watched too many movies, and have become good at predicting plot twists, so don't take it as an insult. ^.^ Poor Deidei, what are they going to do to him? Are they going to fuck up his pretty face, and mae him a bit dumber than he already is? I don't know how I missed chapter 6, I started reading, 7 and I was all pain meds? WTF? I check at least twice a day for updates, so I don't see how I missed that. Oh well, I can't wait to read the next chapter as always. ^.^ XXOO (I too, do happy dances when I see your updates!!)
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From TheSimi on October 02, 2008
I�m so sad for the way Naruto had to spend his childhood and early youth. Thank goodness he and Sasuke found each other. I think that because of what they both have been through they will make wonderful and loving parents to their child (possibly a bit overprotecting�).

Hmm even Naruto recognized the likeness between himself and Minato�

Okay so I can be a bit understanding about Minato letting Naruto suffer. He didn�t know about him at first and it is difficult to care for someone when you can�t find them�Even I have to admit that.

Noo Naruto is finally getting to talk to the father he didn�t know he had and he gets kidnapped�While pregnant! I was so afraid of this happening but I�m putting my trust in your muse that the baby will be safe.

Zetsu still crazy as ever, but as I�ve said he is entertaining. I wonder which of his personalities will win out in the end. I hope that it�s good guy Zetsu and that he will be able to help Naruto in some way.

I hope that Obito and Kisame won�t punish Deidara too severely�I�ve kind of grown attached to the mouth obsessed freak.

Will we see Sasuke�s reaction to Naruto�s kidnapping in next chapter? I can�t imagine that he took the news well�

Thank you so much for this wonderful chapter! I�m totally addicted to this story and I can�t wait to read more!

(I�m sorry for the freakishly long review but I get so into this story that I can�t help myself from ranting�)

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From tawanawelch on October 02, 2008
Ok, so all answers revealed. Thank you so much for that. Poor Deidara is going to be beheaded.:( I hope they go a little easy on him. Great chapter with all the excitement about the baby, the father and the kidnapping.
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From TheSimi on October 01, 2008
Poor Zetsu, but his arguments with himself are really amusing to listen to. So Hidan is the bus driver, that explains why Zetsu could get on the bus without Anko knowing.

Oh no, don�t tell me that Naruto will get pregnant and then kidnapped�Please don�t let anything happen to the baby if that�s the case.

Hot hot hot! Something about shower sex is always scorching�or maybe it�s just me with a fetish�hmm.

I like the way you explain the procedures involved to impregnate Naruto, you make it sound almost possible and it�s a great way of Sasu and Naru to be able to have children of their own in this story.

The fact that Dr. Namikaze (Minato) is Naruto�s dad even in this story came as a bit of a surprise. Where has he been all of Naruto�s life and if he knew about Naruto how could he let him grow up in the horrible conditions that he did?

Thank you for yet another great chapter and I can�t wait to read more!

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From tawanawelch on October 01, 2008
Wait just a minute!! The Dr. is Naruto's father? Whooooa!! Hidan and Kakuzu an item? Hmmm. So the plan is to use Naruto as ransom to get Sasuke's money. Poor Zetsu, doesn't seem so bad now. I'm glad they found a way to make their dreams come true with possibly having a baby. This is going to be so sweet. I love it. I love this story.XD That's nice how Sasuke is trusting of Dr. Namikaze because that is really the love of his life's father. I see how you wrote that. As soon as I finished ch.5 you posted ch.6 that was GREAT!!!!
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From UzumakiTheDobe on October 01, 2008
This chap was really good! I like the fakt that Minato was the doctor.

Keep up the good work! :)
/ Na-chan
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From tawanawelch on October 01, 2008
OMG!!!!!!!! It's a TOTAL HONOR for you to write a Sasuke/Gaara fic for ME!!!!! I'm so excited. I love those two together. I really appreciate that and look forward to it.8D I can see what you mean about Sasuke NOT carrying the baby. Wanting to wallow in his misery would soon turn into murderous intent toward ALL.=D I can't wait for the other 6 ideas of storylines you have been thinking about. I looked at the Not my President t-shirt. Cool. I know what you mean.XD Your plot has thickened with Zetsu trying to break free from an organization and Naruto's the Key to doing so. Drama. Can't wait for next. Thank you so much!!
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From oliversangel on September 30, 2008
So you're really going to go through with MPREG? I wasn't really into it like you, and felt the same away about it, but I read a few HP stories about it, and poor harry was the one who always ended knocked up, and it sort of grew on me. I figured in the wizarding world it was more possible, then there was this hilarious Ewan Mcgregor/Hayden Christanson (whatever his name is) hilarious fic, where Hayden was knocked up with gorgeous Ewan's baby....but I digress. I can just picture a cute little baby giving the infamous Uchiha glare of doom. My son does something like it. Whenever we scold him, he gives us the dirtiest looks. It's so hard not to laugh at the little shit when he does it. I love how Naruto has the ability to calm Sasuke down, and Sasuke just wants to wallow in misery, and be a little brat. I get like that sometimes. I just want to be all pissy, and rage about. Sometimes thats better than being comforted. I could totally picture, well, I can always picture your story in my head, but the part when Naruto was leaning against the door, and then he fell backwards, I can totally see that happening to Naruto. I'm totally with Anko on not being a morning person. Having kids sort of sucks in the morning. At least until I get coffee and a cig anyways. ^.^ XXOO
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From TheSimi on September 29, 2008
As usual this was very, very good! Poor moody little Sasuke! Thank goodness he has Naruto because I think any other perso would have a gard time dealing with him.

What is Zetsu planning and what organization does he want to get free from? You're making me so curious.

I think that Sasuke and Naruto would make very pretty babies...

Thank you so much for this chapter and I can't wait to read more!
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From tawanawelch on September 27, 2008
Man, Naruto's so slow. Even if I really believed Zetsu about reading ALL the interviews of Naruto's and Sasuke's, a red light would still come up you'd think saying it's awfully strange Zetsu was at the right place at the right time to help Naruto. Man, Zetsu is one creepy dude. So he's the one who took the pictures of his own genitalia for Naruto, not Sasuke as I was thinking. oh and I like that you answer the reviews at the beginning, as I may've said before, it's good to know that Authors actually listen to what you say. By the way, I'm glad you THOUGHT about MPREG. Would it be painfully obvious that Sasuke would be carrying the baby? or Naruto? Just wondering.:D
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From TheSimi on September 27, 2008
Again with an amazing chapter! As I have said before I love the interaction between Sasuke and Naruto in this one. They are so loving towards each other and even though they argue and have bad days it's clear that they can't live without one and other.

I agree with Sasuke that Naruto is too trusting. Let's face it, Zetsu is plain creepy and I would have found it more than a little weird that a stranger knows more about your boyfriends shoe size and such than you do... I wonder what Zetsu's two personalities has planned. By the way, how did Zetsu get passes Anko to take pictures of his privates with Sasuke's camera? She doesn't seem the type to slack off on the job.

I'm glad that you have found your muse and know where you're going with this story and I can't wait to read more, thank you so much for this chapter!
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From TheSimi on September 24, 2008
Once again an amazing chapter! I had my suspicions that Mr. Split Personality was Zetsu and now I'm happy that I was right. He was kind of creepy though...I kept picturing Gollum and Smeagol in my head. I don't think we have seen the last of him though.

I find it refreshing that Naruto and Sasuke can still get annoyed with each other, that shows that they are human. No matter how much you love and care for another person you're bound to get pissed at them sometimes. If not something is seriously wrong. I think that it can make a realionship stronger.

The Obito and Kisame interlude was very, very sweet! It's so adorable how in love they are after ten years together.

Thank you so very much for this chapter and as usual I can't wait to read more!
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From tawanawelch on September 24, 2008
Awww, Sasuke and a baby is just simply adorable. I wish this was an MPREG. I'm starting to really get into this sequel.
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