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By : chibikitten
  • From ANON - bec on February 03, 2013
    Ch 13
    That was so so cute xx
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  • From ANON - ichigopudding on December 21, 2012
    Chapter 5
    Heheh so cute, Naru
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  • From ANON - ichigopudding on December 21, 2012
    Chapter 4
    Aww so so cute I loved the bonding. I think naru may have needed a kiss too though from the boys ;)
    Itachi
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  • From ANON - ichigopudding on December 21, 2012
    Chapter 3
    Re the disclaimer: Yeah... yeah, I see all of that happening ;)
    Oh Itachi, haha. Naru
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  • From ANON - ichigopudding on December 21, 2012
    Chapter 2
    Silhouette* ^_^
    Haha so cute x
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  • From ANON - ichigopudding on December 21, 2012
    Chapter 1
    Aww, so cute. Sasuke
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  • From ANON - Mari on October 07, 2012
    I so do enjoy your updates. Please keep them coming!

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  • From ANON - Itanaru4eva on September 07, 2012
    Im so glad the trials are finally over, I can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From krissi on July 31, 2012
    I think that this is am amazing story, and no matter how long it takes for you to get the next chapter up I will be waiting with baited breath. I hope that you post more soon. keep up the good work.

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  • From BetaChick13 on July 19, 2012
    That was absolutely fantastic!! I loved the whole plot, and the bits of delicious naughtiness were very much appreciated. Is chapter 19 going to be the end of this one, or is there going to be more? I think this is the perfect place to end it, but if you want to add more, I won't complain. Also, I wanted to suggest you do something, like a sequel, where Naruto and Sasuke are more grown up and can participate a little bit more... intimately, if you catch my drift. ;D Your English is also really good for someone who didn't originally speak it, I think. I read something about that in one of your author's notes, and I kind of figured you learned English after your original one, but please don't be upset if I got that wrong. >.< I have one main criticism that i wanted to mention though, and I mean this in the kindest way possible, but your punctuation needs a little work. You kept leaving off periods after sentences, mostly in the dialogue, and you consistantly doubled up your end marks, like question marks. The best thing to do would be to just put one, and to only put two at the end if it's a little more forceful. Wow, this turned out to be really long, but I couldn't help myself. This was a truly amazing and addictive story; I couldn't leave it alone until I finished. Thanks so much for posting this here. I'll be looking out for that sequel! :D I'm also just going to throw this out there: if you need a beta, I'd be happy to help. You hardly need it, but there were still a few things that could be fixed. Thanks again!
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  • From tiatan101 on January 31, 2012
    WOOT, updates!!! Amazing chapter, I'm so glad that i checked in to see if this updated! Sasuke was awesome, and i loved how you handled itachis interrogation, hope you update within the next couple of months, this story deserves to be completed! (also i want to read it that badly)
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  • From bloodshound on January 19, 2012
    you... you UPDATED! *bursts into blissful tears of happy happy joy joy.
    At any rate, that was awesome. I love what they're pulling out here but i also want this case to hurry up so we go go back to the epically pervy stuff. >> those two young incubi are sooooooooooo hot. 'tachi doesn't stand a chance against them.
    still, i'm hanging for the next chappie. *goes down on bended knee, begs, grovels.
    pls pls don't make as wait so long between updates... pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase?
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  • From setoswifey on May 12, 2011
    Damn! I knew that the council was going to ask that question! I hope to God that Sasuke can answer correctly. Im officially addicted to this fic. I hope to read more soon.
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  • From bloodshound on May 12, 2011
    ah damn and it was going so well! I am so glad this story is back... its one of my absolute faves.
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  • From mrsneokitty on November 16, 2010
    Sasuke is so briliant! I jut love him.
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