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By : Raholea
  • From ANON - Djargo on January 23, 2011
    It is so wonderful to see an update on this story^^. I thoroughly enjoyed the chapter and it was worth the wait.
    Naruto's and Hinata's date was so sweet^_^. I think you did an admirable job of getting across Hinata's maturing. I adored the way you had her stand up for Naruto in that haughty Hyuga way.She never would have had the nerve before;probably would have stuttered herself senseless. And for her to actually wink at Naruto,to even suggest a bit of mischief would have had her fainting clean away before.
    I also liked how Naruto seemed more balanced now that he has accepted the changes going on in him. I guess the balance also has to do with him finding and accepting Sasuke and Hinata and them accepting him in retun. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From cynaga on January 14, 2011
    An entirely charming first date for Naruto and Hinata!
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  • From ANON - Djargo on October 30, 2010
    Awesome! The action is really picking up. I'm anticipating finding out who's after the Hyuga's and for what purposes. This was a nice twist to the story. And to comment on your last chapter,I think you wrote Naruto convincingly menacing in those scenes where his darker half was in control. I will admit to being totally sucked into the scene where Naruto claimed Sasuke as his beta. It,like the rest of your story,was extremely well written. I look forward to the upcoming chapters as you explore more of Neji's and Naruto's struggles with balancing their instincts and their humanity. Hopefully we'll be getting a hint of who might Neji might be interested in or vice-versa^_^.
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  • From cynaga on October 22, 2010
    Thank You! Big Hug!!!

    Demon Naruto scares me and I am afraid for Sasuke... but if not Sasuke, then who, right?


    Really great writing on the scene with Sasuke, the two Narutos and Kyu. Clear and dramatic!
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  • From ANON - Djargo on October 07, 2010
    I liked this chapter. It was kind of a transition chapter to move the story along. Everyone is moving towards a new level. Sasuke has been re-established as a ninja;Naruto is more in control of Kyuubi as is Neji of his swan,helping their relationship return to a more normal state.
    Naruto's warning to Sasuke was scary/creepy but he deserved it for what he put them through. I'm glad he recognized that he can't screw up this last chance. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From bloodshound on October 07, 2010
    awesome. will they get to go to the exams. Where will they be? Who will they fight? If they go, who'll be on the team?
    wow u do go stuffs. can't wait for more.
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  • From cynaga on October 05, 2010
    Are Sasuke and Hinata Naruto's mates or is it Neji and Hinata?

    Or is Neji going to marry Kimi (great character btw)?

    I am almost sorry I started reading this story because now I have caught up and will have to wait, months on end it seems, for updates. *whine*

    please take pity and update soon! :
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  • From cynaga on October 05, 2010
    Unique, fun, and interesting~! I am so enjoying this story!!!
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  • From serenagold on September 07, 2010
    YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Updates!!

    Great chapter! Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Djargo on September 07, 2010
    I was pretty jazzed to see this update. It's been a while but I guess good things take time^_^.
    You really did a good job getting across Naruto's feelings. It's sad that he would pick his birthday as the one day to let all his feelings of sadness overcome him but understandable.
    I thought it was nice that Sasuke and Sakura are learning how to be there for him and show him he has friends. Also, that scene with Hinata just made me want to give him a big hug.
    I like how you're building his and Hinata's relationship. The little nuzzling/cuddling moment at the end was cute. It showed how he's able to exert more control over his instincts than before. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From Leeana69 on September 03, 2010
    The implied het.

    *shudders*

    I haven't read a Naruto fic in a while, but you and Dina are the only ones I'll consistently go back to. Good chapter, it's an interesting fic and I can't wait to see what you do next. Even with all the het.

    *toddles off to go work on lycan fluff*
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  • From ANON - Djargo on June 03, 2010
    So glad to see you updating again. This chapter was really good. It was very touching,almost sad how both Neji and Naruto were contemplating their futures or lack thereof because of their other selves. I look forward to the next chapter to see where you take these characters.
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  • From serenagold on June 02, 2010
    Great chapter!! Keep up the good work! ^^

    Also, I like all the concerns for the future in this one. Naruto is very practical and Neji just wants to be loved. ^^
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  • From ANON - Djargo on March 19, 2010
    Wow, I can't believe it's been so long since I reviewed.*hangs head in shame* I apologize, since I really enjoy your stories and like giving quality writers their due.
    I was so excited to see this story updated^_^. I enjoyed reading how both Neji and Naruto are coming to terms with the changes in their natures. I like how Kimi is showing Neji that a perceived weakness can be a strength since the Hyuga clan is all about showing strength not weakness.
    I don't exactly know what to make of the prospective changes the continued merging of Kyuubi's and Naruto's chakras will do to Naruto. It's a toss up between slightly disturbing and kinda sexy~_^. Looking forward to what surprises you toss at us.
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  • From Leeana69 on February 27, 2010
    That was an awesome chapter, even though I read half of it before hand. :p

    Can't wait to see what you're doing with the next one, and what you plan to do with Sasuke...after the direction Kishimoto has taken him.

    *growls*
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