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Reviews for Tied With a Bow

By : hatochan
  • From ANON - tukixoxo on May 16, 2009
    Best story ever!!!!! Was a little confussed with Rukas age, but got over that very quickly!!!!! x3 total nose bleed! keep up the awesomeness!
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  • From naracest on April 21, 2008
    hot hot hot hot hot hot hot hot hot...hot hot hot hot hot hot hot. I think that did-no wait, hot hot hot hot...okay, i'm done. Wow. That was soooooooo good. I need a cigarette. Whew. I just read one of your stories on LJ and now i'm going to read them all in the proper order. Sigh. I was supposed to write today but the hell if that's going to happen. Well done!!!!
    Cheers meg
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  • From Erizawa on February 16, 2008
    Fuck awesome! I agree Raidou needs some love he's a dude and his scars are cool. The ending properly made me laugh out loud hehe, my sister looked at me like I was mad but that was a super funny and unexpected twist at the end of a fabby yaoi oneshot XD thank you.
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  • From ANON - kiasca(From LJ) on October 13, 2007
    Wow, O_O you have to write more fics about these three and I promise to draw fanart about then *whipes drool* they were so hot >_<
    And I'm starting to like the RaidouIruka pairing too much, and all because of you
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  • From Ashcat on September 08, 2007
    This was really fantastic. Not only was the sex amazingly smoking hot.. it was really powerful the message they were sending and the emotions you mixed up in it. I love how you showed Raido dealing with his issues and how you showed Iruka's desperate need to belong and be loved a long with genma's desires as well. Damn I'd love to read more about the three of them!
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  • From ANON - Alix on August 24, 2007
    Why oh why did I need that vacation? I could have been enjoying this ages ago!

    Yum. Yes. Oh wow. This is definitely not to be read without a towel handy to mop up the drool. Wow. So incredibly, utterly, deliciously, sensualy amazing. With a birthday like that, I can almost see Raidou dropping by his ex's place just to thank her for dumping him. That had to have been worth it.

    Then again, you clearly state that he hadn't had sex that good since he'd last fucked Genma... so how long ago was that? Can one truly expect poor Raidou to have kept his hands off his delicious friend while being deprived of what he wanted... hmmmm... if so, he's got more self restraint than I would.

    That Iruka is delicious is obvious- it's quite obvious that the piece is written to better showcase your Iruka's sensuality and precocity. My pleasure is obviously then to reread the story twice in order to pick at the mentions of Genma. I can't help but wonder at the relationship between Raidou and Genma at this point. I can pick out a few places where Raidou's attention shifts from Iruka to his best friend- and that's where most of the emotions come out in his mind (i.e. loving Iruka for the barebacking law). I cannot however find any hints of the relationship that will come. I can only hope that you'll detail the shift from best friend-cum-fuckbuddies to actual boyfriends to exclusively committed couple. Ironically, it would probably be best to see that shift from Iruka's point of view. Having been in a relationship with them and being so close, as well as being emotionally astute, he's probably the best to explaint he shifting dynamics between the tokujou.

    (yes, that was an unsubtle request... but you know me by now, anything with Genma makes me happy!)

    Again, beyond the transcending lust that invades every aspect of the story- one has to sit very, very far back to get any technical distance- I can only gush at how lovely the characters are. Genma does take a back seat, but at least he's the one driving the action. Iruka is the beatiful ingénue, and he plays the role perfectly. Raidou makes a lvely viewpoint and the conflict of morals in the beginning followed by his wholehearted embrace of what he's doing just adds that little edge that so nicely complements the physicality of the events. So incredibly yummy...

    And as for the epilogue (once I got over the fact that you'd spent so long on Raidou and Iruka but left out the Raidou and Genma!!!), I've chosen to believe that Iruka took care of the forehead inscription, probably believeing that that would be bad enough. I can see Genma using his past bad experiences with unclean women to leave the perfect personalised, vindictive touch to the bitch who dared to hurt his best friend. And oh, I can just see those twin innocent looks as Raidou asks them who was the guilty party ... I'm sure that Genma practically wore a halo on that occaision and Iruka's watery doe eyes were put to good use as he listened to the evil Raidou hurtfully accuse 'him' of every doing wrong and hurting another human being. Oh to be a fly on the wall for that....
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  • From realnobiki on August 20, 2007
    i'm thinking of farming out all my smut to you now. you and your beta muse. woof, woof, and woof again. i love your characters so much, too much. you caught the love, affection, everything between these three that should be there, and quite a bit more. i don't think i better beg for more because any more and my mind would crack.
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  • From Travellyr on August 20, 2007
    I agree with Genma- so fucking hot!

    *collapses into snickers* Oh.... XDDD Never piss off Iruka-kun. Ever. Especially not when Genma agrees with him.... XDD Jesus Frog on a pogo stick, those two are the devil together. *still laughing* I'm surprised the village survived. Somehow I think that if Naruto had been old enough to be an active participant, it wouldn't've. X3
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  • From yeagerbomb on August 14, 2007
    those LIAHS!!! heeheehee. i haven't read your other work. hmm... maybe i should. this might make a LEETLE bit more sense. great fic anyway. whoo!~
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  • From ANON - Anise on August 14, 2007
    I'm still trying to form coherent thoughts (and stop squeeling!) so i don't even know where to begin telling you about how absolutley delicious this whole thing was, seriously I need a cold shower after that! There really does need to be more rai/iru smut because now I'm more convinced than ever of how steamy they are together! (and genma can join in to if he must ;))
    Now do I really need to go into how fabulously I think you write the smex because I'm sure I've said it before (really i don't think you could write bad porn if you tried) but that you actually got a bit of a plot in there about Raidou and his scars was wonderful! I liked how Iruka just knew what had happened and that they were so protective of Rai and made him feel completely loved. The ending was perfect, seriously how could you not think Rai was smexy, she totally deserved it, makes me wish I was stealthy enough to do that to a couple of people in real life! ;)
    You mentioned me in the author notes *hugs* that was totally sweet and completely unexpected but your the bestest ever for doing that, especially considering that even little things like that tend to amuse me to no end, oh my boring little life! :)
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  • From ANON - Just_me on August 13, 2007
    Gawds, first I was suffering from mayor nosebleed (I just loved your slutty Iruka so much), and reading the last part I died of laughter (I could so see Genma do such a thing like paint 'I have crabs' on a chick, while wearing a feral smirk). Your story is just, in one word, HOT! Heck, who wouldn't want a birtday like that... X3

    ja ne ^^V
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  • From KansouAme on August 13, 2007
    hatochan.. that was sweet and hot and smexy! Way to go!!
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  • From fuyunoakegata on August 13, 2007
    Sigh... this is so flippin' hawt. Wonderful writing. The imagery is just... I feel like I can see the yumminess in front of me, I could reach out and touch them, just wish we really could lol
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